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Reviewed By: Vbprl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2016 22:59 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Wow, their love was so destructive, yet they couldn't live without
each other. Poor Trunks, he was the most affected.
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Reviewed By: Female_typhoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 12:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting plot. quite dark and nasty in places but generally very well written. it does seem, however, that you rushed the ending slightly. it may just be me being used to longer stories.
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Reviewed By: the blackest butterfly On: January 20, 2005 19:08 PST
Comment/Review:
oooh...interesting! it's on my faves list. and the whole bulma cheating on vegata thing was intersting. you'd expect it to be the other way around, yet at the same time you could see this happening. and trunks turning all evil made me wanna cry!
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 28, 2004 08:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so sorry to hear that this was the end.i really loved this story so sad yet so down to earth.i hope you keep writing them.please put me on your mailings list if you have one...until the next adventure thanks :) maria
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 30, 2004 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that bastard oh that bastard.he told her to kill him she thought that if she did that he would come back to her.i just hope that she has enough fight in her to fight him.oh i'm starting to hate him...what saiyans don't make mistakes there so damn perfect.MY ASS they are...let the fight begin go bulma...maria
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Reviewed By: JU On: August 23, 2004 20:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
This needs to continue.
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Reviewed By: NJN [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 22:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story.
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 17, 2004 18:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i can't believe that he would ask her to do this.(well yes i can he's vegeta)lol.but i hope after all she did that he would finally forgive her...i want more...maria
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 13, 2004 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love this story.i can relate to it and i guess thats why i cry everytime i read it...one of my best all time favorites...please keep updating soon .. how i wish that he can forgive her..maybe theres a new moon or a rut they call it and it brings them together some how.if not then please give her the courage to move on...maria
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 09, 2004 17:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
It would be an interesting scene of events if Trunks got to Vegeta first and told him everything that happened at the house before he returned.
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: na na j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 08:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
It's great but how can Bulma be so stupid.stupid.stupidstupid stupid. Another chapter please
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 09, 2004 05:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still wish that things will start to look up for her and him...i know that he's hurt but come on....i want her to kick his ASS when he comes back...let her prove to him that she is worthy of him.please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 07, 2004 03:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
For someone like Bulma to claim that she's a genius, she sure is a bloody idiot. The alarm bells should have been ringing in her head when Dagan asked her if she was happy in her marriage to Vegeta, and instead of flocking to him all the time, she should've flocked to Vegeta to work things out long before it ever got to the point of her cheating on the saiyan.
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Reviewed By: NJN [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 23:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
Reading this I kind of don't want them to get back together.
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 04, 2004 18:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO I'M CRYING HERE......I DON'T KNOW IF I CAN TAKE ANYMORE OF THIS.IT'S TO PAINFUL TO READ SUCH EMOTIONS....HOW CAN SHE WIN HIS HEART BACK.WHAT KILL HERSELF...COME ON GIVE ALREADY...MARIA
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