Reviewed By:Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 09:45 PDT Comment/Review: Wow! i like this idea alot. I've just read this other story with Vegeta cheating on Bulma and now your story of bulma cheating on Vegeta. Haha~ you HAVE to update soon! I'll be waiting!
Title: a really good beginning Reviewed By:debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 06:43 PDT Comment/Review: Excellent first chapter. You've got a real sense for the realism of tiny moments and psychological drama. Very gripping opening. I'm definitely reading this one. debbiechan