| "the u.s.a spirit detectives?!?" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 22:08 CDT
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Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:07 CDT
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if you update soon I'll give you some cheese.....you know you want it....so update!!!!...remember cheese
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Title: jidfgjdkjgijgijgtirjdfnfg
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:05 CDT
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hello any body home..... UPDATE!!! SOON PLEASE!!!!!
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Title: Update!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Angel Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: WereAngewomon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 06:40 CDT
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Thanx for checking out my story. I just started it so i didn't know if people would like it. Anywho please update sooooon! Thanx for ur time.
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 15:06 CDT
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sorry I usaly skip the authors note and read the chapter any way her family was a veary rare demon breed since they were killed she the last she a demon of the elaments all of them in time of desprate need she draws energy from whaterver's arownd her earth,wind,fire,ect.
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 14:47 CDT
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ok necer mined I just read chapter 6 that name is soooooo so so much beter than Stella ack! I hate that name I dont know why I thout of it I was in a hurry my told me to get my lazy ass off the compter and do the laundery..
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 14:44 CDT
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ok ok ok I tout of a name!!! drum roll please!!! her name is...umm hold on a sec...I got it!no I dont..now I do for real this time Stella ok I know corny name but it was the best I could think of...PLEASE LET ME BE IN THE FIC PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! ok thats all update soon! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
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Title: Here's a guy for ya
Reviewed By: FeithCaios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 10:19 CDT
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Name: Skur Gender: male Age: 17 Race: Human ('cuz I'm too lazy to think up a demon type for him) History: Raised in an apocalyptic enviroment, Skur trusts very few people. He prefers to work by himself, but will work wiht others if you pay him enough. Clothing: Army pants with black muscle shirt. Combat boots Partners: He doesn't have any Status: Umm, he probably will remain single, but if you want to pair him off with someone, then feel free to Physical description: Tall, muscular, hot (sorry, but I want him to be), white hair (all hot guys have it), umm, you choose the color of his eyes Attitude: That of a mercenary, he's only doing it for the money, so he's quiet, cold and insensitive. Sorry, but there's no good side to this guy that anyone can see Strength: When he's paid Weakness: When people offer him money, He's a greedy little bastard huh?
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: WereAngewomon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Kimba On: June 17, 2004 22:29 CDT
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Sha is a bat demon i forgot to tell u that... sha likes to sleep upside down (like a real bat) when she is be new people
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Reviewed By: Kimba On: June 17, 2004 22:22 CDT
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i'll be good .but turn evil .. if that will help
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 20:14 CDT
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Hey!! Thanks for putting me in!!Its great so far!!Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 19:26 CDT
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YAY!!! you updated!!! i LOVE it!! pelase update soon!
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Title: SORY!!!!
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 12:42 CDT
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SORY SORY SORY SORY SORY!!!!!! I forgot she wears black leather boots and never backs down to a fight sory!!! oh ya and update soon!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!YAY!!!
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