| "the u.s.a spirit detectives?!?" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: spirtq On: June 17, 2004 07:27 CDT
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:31 CDT
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SORRY! I'm aveary forgetfull person... any way I want the character I made up to be paied with heie or kurama if those too are unavaleable don't pair her with any one thanks oh yo update update update!!!! PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:23 CDT
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oppies! I forgot some things!!!she has pail skin slightly tan and pionted ears. and some more stuff to her history since she was 7 and along in human world she survived by a lady that took she in when she found her she left without a word at the age of 16 this is a good fic I like it update PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:07 CDT
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ok here is a charecter that I thout of(cant spell for shit) name:I dont know can you make up one for me?age:19 gender girlhistory:boarn in mikai family killed in frount of her eyes at the age of 7 sister died saveing her leting her escape to human world what dose your character wear?: a black thing that looks like a hooded cape or a long over coat w/ no sleevs and hood,(ongly wears it at night) skin tight lether pants, red v necked tank topwhat dose your charecter look like:hight,5'9 hair,waist leghth blue at the end and no bangs eyes,midnight blue silver arownd the edges body,slim tall tone what wepon dose your character use:spirit,orb that can get to any size she wants that explode on contact(she throwes them) normal wepon,whip aditudesarcastic,somtimes cold,silent,reliable and indapendant streanth: the thout of reverge weaknesshistory and the ones she loves(you know beacas of what happened to her sister)dont want to be with:kuabaka(can you tell I dont like him?)or koenma
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 22:39 CDT
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Name:Saku Age:18 History:Was taken from parents when very young.ever sense then she has been going back a forth to the worlds aimlessly ever sense Clothes:chinese atire thats red with gold designs Appearence:5,2 long black hair down to knees(always in a braid)dark evergreen eyes,naturally red lips Weapons:normal twin katanas Attiude:very quit,keeps to self,not good with new people, but does ajust Strength:Friends,her pride Weakness:emotions,past Who u want to be with:SINGLE.PLZ PLZ PLZ let me be in it I now I am very late,but I would be very thankful if u still put me in^_^
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Reviewed By: Masha On: June 16, 2004 21:39 CDT
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 17:53 CDT
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oh yeah,Kimba then we think same,i think...yeah...right?^^ teehee well laters^_^
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 17:52 CDT
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its ok Kimba^^ its quiet alright^^ i'm just happy that your in^^ see you in the fic^^
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Reviewed By: kimba On: June 16, 2004 17:34 CDT
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this is to Lover_girl15-20, dude i'm soo soo sorry i didn't know that u had the same last name as i picked, i don't read the reviews with i put my person down... i guess great minds think alike... but any I'm SO SO SO sorry plz fogive me dude ^.^6;;
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Reviewed By: Kimba On: June 16, 2004 17:29 CDT
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DUDE I didn't know that some had the some last name as mine ... can u chage it.... err plz , i like being an olny child!( not to be mean)
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Reviewed By: kimba On: June 16, 2004 17:27 CDT
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i like chpater 1, one more thing if Sha still blame's Yoko for her fathers death, and was the one who put hin in tghe human world. update soo dude!
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh*^^ ok i'm reviewing too much right? oh well. i like your fic thats why^^ well i erally really really LOVE your fic and i can't wait anymore for your next chappie^^ its the best so far so please hurry and make the next chappter okies?^^ if your busy than just take your time^^ ~Solita Hitomi
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still waiting for that next chapter^^
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Reviewed By: Fe On: June 16, 2004 12:04 CDT
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Kitchel: age: As old as time itself gender: female wears: olive green pants; violet halter top with a brown jacket; black boots history: pretty good boxer; fights for all sorts of causes like animal rights; enjoys fighting large groups of people; vegetarian Weapons: Controls water; has a weapon that is a quarterstaff when blades are sheathed, when unsheathed there are two blades. Personality: Upbeat and outgoing; sometimes even hyper; she also enjoys freaking people out With: best friend Kyoko and fire unicorn named Passion Status: Remains single Strength: When underwater Weakness: She's kind of claustrophobic.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Lady of Myria On: June 16, 2004 11:05 CDT
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Name: Kusabana Otome Age: 500 yrs (whitch is young, for her) History: got separated from her parents at birth and grew up by herself (she has no morals whatsoever) Wear: BLUE! with sometimes a little silver Looks Like: green hair(dont ask) silver eyes 5'4" Weapon: katanas Attitude: loner (but can be very outgoing when shugar high)(doesnt drink caffene and/or alchohol) Strength: friends in danger Weakness: her cat (Zan) Partner: nobody (she hangs around for no reason)
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