| "the u.s.a spirit detectives?!?" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Title: Hiyas
Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
huh? wha? I read reviews and i have a twin?!? And i never knew?-_- i always get missed out on information^^ who's the twin where where?_> oh i see HIYA Sha! I'm happy that you have same personality and stuff like me HI!!!^^ but sorta knida wanted my own individuality but oh well back to author: Hiyas!! please update soon!! i'm itching for the next chapter..literally! love it!
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Title: Forgot something
Reviewed By: WereAngewomon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 09:15 CDT
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My last name is Shimamura. Okay? Great job so far please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sue- of hell On: June 16, 2004 09:15 CDT
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Hi. love your story and it's quiet cool. i sue copiers but your not one of them unlike some people on this site/fiction story >_>so that is good. you said you needed a male character am i correct? well i'll try to think of somethingup for one. and for all you mary sues and copy want to bes out there. i flame you all*laughs menacingly* well. please do work on the next chapter of your fiction soon.
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Reviewed By: JaCkLe On: June 16, 2004 09:07 CDT
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um....i'm JaCkLe and... are Sha and Solita like related or something or twins like that?....they uh..sorta sound like the same people...and....uh...Did Sha like...copy paste or something....like..ya...weird...right? and uh...great..like fic
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 08:54 CDT
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hope ya update soon^^
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Reviewed By: xXMidori-ChanXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kita is a fox demon. Her ears and tail is the same color as her hair, sorry I didnt put that in. ^.^"
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 07:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! more chapters!! thank you thank you thank you!! your da best your da greatest!! i absolutely LOVE your fic!!! i really hop you update soon okies^^ you got yourself a fic fan here!!*waves hands*
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Reviewed By: Kimba On: June 16, 2004 07:38 CDT
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i forgot to put... i have black bat wings on my back ( thinks that girl with blue hair for :hack sign)
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Title: hhhhhmmmm
Reviewed By: kuro_mirai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
lets see
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 17:22 CDT
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okies....i review too much right? sorry^^; i like to review and once again^^ thank you^^ *faints from too much excitement^^*
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 17:19 CDT
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I still than you!!! you (hehe) kinda had me scared and worried when i didnt see my character bio until the end^^*phew* ^^ well thanks soooo much and i hope you put up the next chapter soon^^
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH!!!!* jumps around like crazy* THANK YUO THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU!!!! i told you i'd be extremely thank you^^ thanks again!!! Solita Hitomi
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Reviewed By: Kimba On: June 15, 2004 16:44 CDT
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Comment/Review: name: Sha Hitomi age: 17 gender: girl history: kurone is my Father. Kurone and Yoko went out to go something from a temple, But my father didn't come back. Yoko told me he was taken away, but i didn't belive that, and i Belive Yoko kill my father. what dose your charecter wear:Black Kimono with a white Bat .What dose your charecter look like: Icy Blue eyes. Has very dark brown hair that looks like black at night. Milky tan shin color. The hair is waist length. Is 5'8 tall. what wepon dose your charector have: Crossbow and arrows. A chain with a half Moon blade attached to it. . attiude: Shy when talk to new people. Upbeat, outgoing, friendly, honest, tough, And hide sad feelings. strength: family, friends, anger Weakness: people telling about bad things about my past, loosing someone. and who u ont to be with: Koenma or Yusuke
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Title: Can i join?
Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 15:19 CDT
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Name-Green Age 14 Gender- Female History-My father was sort of abusive, and when my mother found out she tryed to protect me but died in the process.Then i went to live with my brother who was 18.I stayed their till i was 10.What does ur charecter wear-A navy blue tank top with dark green baggy pants What does ur charecter look like:black-dark brown hair with red tips and orange eyes.Is 5'4 tall.Wat weapon does your person have-She has a katana Spirt weapons-controls lighting, can make a bow and arrows and is fast Attiude-Shy at first,...is nice, and friendly, hides sad feelings strength-Family friends Weakness-looseing someone, and telling people about her past Who i want to be with: u can chose,....or i can be single,....... Oh yeah!! i'm a black wolf demon!!I hope u chose me!! ,..........if not thats ok too!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 13:10 CDT
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Name:Angel Himura,age:15,gender:girl,history:I'm a half demon like my brother,dad is a full demon who can control all elemants,mom is a human,I know about the demon world because dad took me and my brother there every month,outfit:sky blue shirt and blue jeans,Hair:blonde,midback,eyes:blue,Height:a little shorter than Yusuke,skin:a light tan,weapon:spirit staff,elemental weapons,a katana,attitude:outgoing,not shy,can beat up Kuwabaka,caring,tough,friendly,and you don't want to make her mad,strength:friends,family,weakness:loosing someone,Paired with:1. Yusuke(PLEASE!!!!!),2.Jin. Please pick me!!!!!!!!!!!!Please!!!!!!!!!!!
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