| "Untouchable Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: sorry
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 10:48 CDT
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sorry about the 2 reviewz....my computer is a jack a**
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Title: You're killin' me here
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 17:55 CDT
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JUST WHEN IT WAS ABOUT 2 GET GOOOOOOOOD!! I would bow down 2 u rite now as I have bin searchin' 4 the longest time 4 a Hiei and Keiko fic. U have finally answered my prayerz and there is the God of Anime!! Plz, I'm feelin' a lemon 4 the next chapter. Don't let me die now!!!
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Title: You're killin' me here
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 17:52 CDT
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JUST WHEN IT WAS ABOUT 2 GET SOOO GOOD!!! I would rite now bow 2 u oh mighty 1 as I have bin searchin' endlessly 4 a Hiei and Keiko fic. Plz do not go and end it like that. I can feel that a lemon is the way 2 go 4 the next chap. I hope u this and ur other reviewz will convince u enuf 2 do sooo!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I'm glad that Hiei ain't gay in this.
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Title: !!!!!
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love it, even if u didn't make a lemon. Lime is fine!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. plz update realllllllllllly soon.
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Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 15:16 CDT
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Interesting. I love the way you didn't go on and on about wudda cuuda shuudas you went straight to the poitn with the characters feelings. I love that. Plus your descriptions of Hiei's voice ^^.
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Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh please update and continue. Oh yea..and have a lemon tooo! Please? Update!
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Reviewed By: inkheart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and the crowd chants: Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! and the reviewer shall ask for them: please write more and make the next chapter a lemon cause well they want it {points to audience} and so do i- a little bit- only a little- ANYWAY please update soon so that i may read and then review and tell you of your greatness, o mighty authoress of all power and knowledge of this story!!!! {wow major sucking up on my part} but is sucking up a bad thing? nope....... please update soon!!
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Title: Love it!!!!!
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 17:51 CDT
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yes, lemon!!! don't make them find her in time, I want to see thm together! i absolutely love Hei, as much as I love ur story ( which is alot!)
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Reviewed By: Starzie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Niiiiice! Please, update soon. I's like to see more of this story!
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI there! YES THERE SHOULD BE A LEMON! I don't mean to get too excited over that or anything, but...ok, mabye I am, BUT the point is I like your story and hope to see an update soon. hehe ^_______^ I'm in such a happy mood.
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