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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very emotional story for me to read. You really conveyed Duo's heartsickness over Heero's loss so well that I actually shed a tear or two. I felt the ending was totally appropriate to the story. I was disappointed that Relena didn't get her's in the end though. It's just not right that she could be that vindictive and get away scott free. I liked that Duo and Quatra got together in the end. They were so good together through out the story. Overall, this has been a very refreshing and different read. The world ain't a happy place most of the time and you brought that out quite well. Great story!
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Reviewed By: Muffie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the ending to this story. I do believe that a 1x2 ending wouldn't have done the plot nearly as much justice as the ending you did write. The world isn't a fairy tale place and while the ending wasn't fairy tale happy (that would have been too convenient), it was a good one that ended on a high note. Though, I do wish Relena had gotten spanked for what she did somehow. Muffie is vindictive.
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: October 28, 2004 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this story was amazingly good, good fanfiction is in such short supply these days. And the ending was good, I know some people believe that certain characters should be together no matter what, but in a more realistic way, people don't always come together and beat all odds as simply as most fangirls(and boys) like to believe, and i thought this story illustrated that perfectly.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: October 27, 2004 23:36 CDT
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I actually really like this. Cause yeah, realistic more so. And I do like 1x2, but I like many many pairings, esp if done really well. When you wrote the 4x2 stuff, I felt really bad for Quat that Duo'd be leaving. So I think it works out rather nicely. Go you!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lady Dea On: October 25, 2004 19:07 CDT
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*looks up from stabbing a relena dollie* ah ^.^ hehehe *hides the dollie and the knife behind her back* i wasnt doing n e thing SERIOUSLY. but its not like she doesnt deserve it! oh and i knew the baby thing was gonna come into view it was just prefect. but dont you think this story s just a LITTLE tragic? just tiny bit? i mena i cant read it for long amounts of time i start crying! im serious. we need a happy ending here like a good happy ending. where relene gets shot and Q and Tro get back together *smakes tro on the back of his head* i swear! its just tragic! but the story is goooooooooood ^.^ yes it is that good!!!!!! cant wait for the next chapter *sigh* *huggle* write more ^.^ ja! Dea
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Title: ....wow
Reviewed By: me On: October 21, 2004 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude... i'm gonna cry. this story is so powerful very well written man oh man.... wow :'{
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: October 20, 2004 19:40 CDT
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Damn that's tense and intense. The fat lady sings?!?! Wow, you're efficient in your wrapping things up. So I CANNOT wait for the next installment, hurry hurry!!! Please update soon, thank you so much for writing this, it's such a great fic ^_^
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Reviewed By: DeathsAngel1816 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish they made the ratings out of 100 because your story is just that wonderful. Having to stop reading this story is like cutting off my right arm. It's painful. Your characters are so exact, it's like there were writen by the original creator. I love you for that. Duo is perfect and Quatre, my favorite, is (even though he remins me of a character named Roake, from J.D. Robb's 'In Death' series) so incrediably angsty. Yey! I love angst and this story had be bawling(a great feat). I know I said it before but I love your story and have became addicted to it. So if you don't update soon I'll go through a painful withdrawl. . .
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 19:09 CDT
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Still one of the best reads around. I really hope Relena gets hers. I'd like to see the Pink Pricess in orange.
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: September 30, 2004 19:07 CDT
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::sob:: I'm so sad! why doesn't quatre get any love? Sobsobsobs. Screw heero. Waaaaa. >.< Can't wait for the next bit to come out!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:12 CDT
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*dabs away the tears from my eyes* how sweet...looking forward to your next chapters *hugs* you soo rawck
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:20 CDT
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Eee, I really could not see any good result of them making out. Now Duo's face in going to be in the papers and Trowa and he both are in danger, I bet. I think Quatre's position is logical, and (except for the lack of Trowa) it shows whoever messed with his Integration at least tried a little to make him happy. That's something, at least. Quatre made a good point though: *Duo* hasn't lived these years in between and thus his opinions haven't changed, but if he had... would he and Heero still be together? I certainly didn't stay with the love of my 15 year old exsistance. I still feel sorry for Duo. I think I will until Relena and Une are integrated to be nuns on L2.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 14:26 CDT
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I'm a little nervous, that was almost too easy. I'm getting more worried about Trowa, too; I hope he's still alive. ] Was that just Quatre's charm, or a little of his empathic abilities projecting Quatre's own desires? They reinforced Duo's training with pain; it sure looks like they used lust for Quatre. I wonder how loyal the Maguancs are? And to whom?
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: September 02, 2004 13:57 CDT
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look I'm FINALLY writing a review! I think your story is really great, not only is the plot new and interesting but its also pretty carefully thought out, or at least it comes out that way. Not moving too quickly or stumbling over itself. I think the reason you aren't getting many readers is because your story summary comes off as either a reincarnation fic or some other form of AU..... a lot of people don't like those -- I sure don't. The only reason I gave your story a chance is because I was REALLY bored -- But I'm really glad I did! So maybe in your summary if you put "NOT A REINCARNATION FIC" or something like that you'll pick up some more readers.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 11:40 CDT
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As much as I crave updates, I hate to think of you investing *real* blood, sweat and tears into the fic. Take care of yourself and I will attempt to wait patiently. Ha! The noticable lack of Trowa worries me. I wouldn't be surprised to find that he was being held hostage somehow to insure Quatre's good behaviour. Or that again the agreements were messed with and Tro is currently a cost accountant in Iceland. I loved Duo's path of hiding his tracks; I note that he becomes the other pilots either deliberately or subconsciously. Poor lonely kid. I do think he's fooling himself about Relena and Une relaxing their guard. They have him on a real, high penalty, peace time crimes, now.
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