| "Integration" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 22:15 CDT
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Wonderful chapter but so tantalizing! I want to know why and how Duo and the others were Integrated. I too, never thought he'd agree to it. I'm suspecting Evil Relena behind it all, but then, I like to blame everything on her. I want to know who but Scott in charge of Duo and why no one stopped the thug. I really want to know where the other pilots are and if they are in as bad straights. I do like your original characters, a rare thing from me. They are very real, even Scott the scum. I hope Scott gets what he deserves: integration to be a hamster. Duo can put him on the wheely toy and leave town.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 18:54 CDT
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Keep writing! This is so cool. Okay, since I've said that far too often, I guess I'll stop. But still, very good read. ^_^
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Title: Lee
Reviewed By: narutofan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grammar is not a big thing with me but it does make it easer to read. I am enjoying the story and that is what is really important. Update soon and offten. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 21:43 CDT
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This is so kickass! I do hope it's continued soon. I think this is terribly intriguing. Go you!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: July 15, 2004 14:27 CDT
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I admit that when I read the chapter title I wondered if Duo had killed Scott. Now I'm sort of hoping he will. I was also slightly afraid that Scott *was* Heero, but I should have known the Powers That Be would prevent that. I am very curious about where all the gundam pilots (and poor Zechs) are. So Duo escaped before? ...or was that conversation also staged? Certainly the medic seemed to suspect something. Love this fic, so original and horrifying, really, for the Integrators are truly playing God.
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Will you kill Scott slowly. Other than the fact I don't like him. I love the story. It's orriginal and so far the plot is a real cliff hanger. Please new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: RitoruIkko On: July 09, 2004 17:50 CDT
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Nifty-ness. I want to see Duo kick that bastard Scott's ass! And I can't wait for the other pilots. Keep going! ^_^
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Title: My God I Love It
Reviewed By: Lady Silverwings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb. Absolutely superb. Another one of your classic stories. Please update soon! The twists and turns in the plot have got me on edge!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: July 09, 2004 06:55 CDT
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Yet another awesome chapter! Continue ^_^! Btw, the hynosis idea and the metamorphesis, all cool.
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Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic. I'm not that big of a fan of pilot 02, so I don't tend to read fics featuring him, my favorite being 05. Your summary caught my eye and I became intertested in what you were going to do with it. Your idea about the intergration is very creative I have not seen anyone else do anything like it. The story flows nicely and everything you have happening is not only plausible but logical in its contents and sequence. I am really enjoying your work and hope that you continue. It has been a while since I picked up a new fic and added to my reading list. It is not because the other writters are bad it is more because the stories that have been coming out recently have not been able to catch or keep my attention especially the GW fics. Your story has caught and kept my attention and I plan to read more when you update again.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 22:06 CDT
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You write more now ^_^ This is such a cool story and the characterizations and the plot and the EVERYthing!! Please update when you're able ^_^
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Reviewed By: Doshirei On: June 28, 2004 01:49 CDT
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I like it. But I keep wondering why Heero and Duo act the way they do. I mean, all the violence should've left them after that "treatment" right? And why does Heero have brown eyes? Contacts? Hope you could update this soon so I'll get the answers to my questions.
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Title: Make way for a whole new world
Reviewed By: `Kino On: June 26, 2004 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahahaha! That was SO GOOD! lol. During the third chapter when Jason's other persona came out... ahahaha I was laughing myself! That was interesting! I love the way how you incorporate ideas into new ones. Heero's a bastard though! But oh well, It's part of the story! I love your story line and can't wait for you to update it! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what Duo does next! lol ~ Rekino
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Reviewed By: footnotes On: June 18, 2004 02:12 CDT
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Looks like the beginning of an angst-filled story. I hope this is one of your multi-chapter fics like Grudging Seduction. I'm hoping this will be just as good as that story.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 02:25 CDT
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Better damn well be continued soon! ~_^ Well, no, don't wanna antagonize the author nor the muses. However, I really hope the updates will be soon and plentiful as this fic kicks ass! You rock, keep that in mind ^_^
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