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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 11:40 CDT
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As much as I crave updates, I hate to think of you investing *real* blood, sweat and tears into the fic. Take care of yourself and I will attempt to wait patiently. Ha! The noticable lack of Trowa worries me. I wouldn't be surprised to find that he was being held hostage somehow to insure Quatre's good behaviour. Or that again the agreements were messed with and Tro is currently a cost accountant in Iceland. I loved Duo's path of hiding his tracks; I note that he becomes the other pilots either deliberately or subconsciously. Poor lonely kid. I do think he's fooling himself about Relena and Une relaxing their guard. They have him on a real, high penalty, peace time crimes, now.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 02:27 CDT
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*hugs and pulls out a sharpie* wan me to sign it? *scribles out "Kix: Kid tested, mother approved" hope you heel fast!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 23:58 CDT
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Another edgy, perfect chapter. You do suspense so well. I was glad to see Deb and Duane again, they are great characters. And even if they are brainwashed Preventor robots, it's nice to know Zechs and Wufei are at least safe. I am dying to know what's up with Quatre and how he mangaged to keep his name. And where Trowa is, of course.
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Reviewed By: Ggirl Venus On: August 21, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it! Creative, unique, original, everything that I enjoy in a fic. Definetly want to know what's gonna go down here though...write faster! No, jk. I'm a writer, I know it takes time... Keep up the great work! I am definetly hooked!
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu let Scott off way too easy. I'm still reading and enjoying. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: SweetasStrychnine (not signed in) On: August 19, 2004 18:41 CDT
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Quatre and Trowa...not together...? Travesty! I've been following the story for a while now and its facinating. Your portrayal of Duo and how he gets his life back is brilliant. I really enjoy how everything is explained and I'm hoping that a happy ending will be possible.
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Title: Too lazy to sign in
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: August 19, 2004 13:59 CDT
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MORE! I truly adore this fic. Luckily, I don't think I have many/any pre-conceived notions, but if I do, I'll purge them immediately ^_^ Anyway, it would be spiffy if things worked out for Duo in the end, but ya know, that's just my issue. Umm, oh and his plans and everything and wow. Please update when you are able.
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Reviewed By: Stray [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 08:09 CDT
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I like this fic, it's refreshingly original. And I like Duo's hair like that. I can't wait for Heero to come into the fic. I sense a great disturbance in the force there... #D
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 01:25 CDT
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Yeay!! Duo is BACK!! and time for some good old fassioned Shingamiy Style REVENG!!!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 11:53 CDT
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I can't say I'm sorry, except that the deaths endanger Duo. I did like the change in plans in that it kept the story sharp - I was on the edge of my seat, wondering if Duo would make it. Silly me. Now all he has to do is control Shinigami.
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Reviewed By: Wufei's _Sexy On: August 07, 2004 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a well written story ! Thank god someone realises that Relena is a bicth ! (lol) I hope you update this soon cause I really want to find out what happens to Scott and the Heero situation. Mabye for one of the chapters you should show Heero's life as Relena's husband ( if you do make the marriage and unhappy one; thaz one way to get back Relena)
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 13:12 CDT
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Wicked cliffhanger! I loved the logical, methodical way you show Duo taking his life back. And I really like (and will miss) your original characters. Ususally I hate all original characters, but Deb and Duane were perfect. Well, Scott is too, but I hate him anyway. Who is Preventer Fire? Duo knows... but I'm not sure. I'm dying to find out, though. Back to the cliff hanger... Hmm, Duo gets away clean, or it gets messy and Duo is forced to kill Scott slowly and painfully. I can live with that!
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Title: this is sooooo great!
Reviewed By: sra! On: July 30, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is terrific! what a unique idea! and sooo sad! angst is super i really wanna see duo reunite with heero - stupid relena! I love it! can't wait for more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:08 CDT
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Another amazing chapter. I'm amused about the title now. Integration into society, integration of multiple personalities. Nifty ^__^ Write more!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 23:38 CDT
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Brilliantly done. I and so pissed on Duo's Behalf - and Heero's. I bet Quatre and the others fared no better. I hope they get their lives back. You do so well, making this fic so intense I can't help but have an emotional reaction. Love it.
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