| "Kagome's Return (sequel to Kagome! Where are you!?" Reviews/Comments [ 215 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As far as I'm concerned you're not doing anything wrong. What I used to do was wait till you were done with you story then read it and review. In other stories I waited till the end of the story to review maybe that's what people are doing. Are you going to go into the thing with Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's mother or are you going to let us guess about it? Well very good I like the story a lot.
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Reviewed By: tuborgwolf On: July 12, 2004 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(AKA Silver1) I think your stories are wonderful... I didn't like all the character deaths, but I like what Kouga did with the curse! and I am very anxious to see what happens with the triangel. How is Kagome going to react when she learns her family's souls are going to end up destroyed? I think the God tree may be in trouble. Please update soonest!
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Reviewed By: Someonestupid111 On: July 12, 2004 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You aren't doing anything wrong!! Your story is great!! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiRei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You aren't doing anything wrong. I believe I liked "Kagome! Where are you?!" better because it didn't change the storyline so dramatically, and people's overall (mental and physical) strengths, powers, and weakness' were somewhat the exact same as in the series. I honestly, really do like this fanfiction. But personally, I would have just imagined the ending without the creation of this fanfic. (I'm truly sorry if I'm being harsh, I really do like this sequel!!! But just not as much as your original.) ^^
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Reviewed By: Airashii Kuraku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're not doing anything wrong at all. I think it's just that everybody is trying to figure out what will happen so much that they forgot to reveiw. Or they're like me and don't remember to review in the first place until an author says something about reviewing. And it turns out that mm.org is really lazy on the review thing. Where one story will have over 1000 reviews on ff.net it will only have 80 on mm.org. We're so freakin' lazy.
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your doing nothing wrong you are doing wonderfully! I love your story both of them! (i haven't read the others yet) It is very good and original!
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Title: Still strong
Reviewed By: shadownekko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see nothing wrong with your writing, story line is still good. Maybe we the readers are behaving unforgivably lazy. It is summer so maybe the readers are are out sunning and attending parties. With the return of the various school years, perhaps the other readers will return from their hiatus and send reviews again.
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Reviewed By: Heninu111 On: July 11, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soo good. i luv how it is turning out. Why do u write fanfics u should be writing professionally u are definitly good enough and i would buy them. I luv how u do updates on regular basis i turn my computer on just to read ur story. Its pretty much the only one that i read any more. Keep writing. I luv ur stories all of them.
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Title: titles are stupid
Reviewed By: KikyoKiller [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing your doing wrong is giving me a heart attack. I have read Kagome! Where Are You?! since the beginning and now I continue to read with Kagome's Return. I absolutely LOVE all of your stories. Especially this one and it's prequil. Ans frankly the only thing that's been bothering me (or rather pissing me off) with this whole thing is Kagome's relationship with Sesshoumaru. Seriously. All those wives plus concubines. Kagome being nothing but his concubine. Please tell me the story won't end with THAT relationship. It seriously, and in all honesty, is the shitiest thing to have ever happened between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. It completely brings me down. Don't think I'm trying to flame or anything, I'm just rambling and complaining. Don't mind me. Just heed my warning. Well, anyways. Once again......wonderful chapter!! Please update soon, jeffs!!!!! Peace!
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Title: You're not doing anything wrong dude
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're not doing anything wrong 2 me. I think the story is going quet well. I Like how u set everything up. Damn like i said before... i wish i could write as good as u. Like "the author know as Artemis" said i would also buy this story in a flash if u could publish it. I love it. Damn... just keep updating untill you finish the story and I'll be happy. ^_^ ttyl ~Courtney~
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: July 11, 2004 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it might be some people think your jumping the gun a little, thhough not to the extremes I see some authors do. Next chapter expand a little, in such that maybe punishment is enacted upon Kanna. Perhaps Miroku oversees the punishment... Ah, also finish A Shard In Kyoto to tie things in. Thats all I can say. Semper Fidelis
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Reviewed By: Kyouri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing. I keep hoping you'll turn out more chapters faster, but we guess we have to be happy with what we get. You aren't doing a thing wrong, Jeff. ^_^ You can't let the number of reviews discourage you. Think of how the rest of us would feel if you abandoned us. *hopes her tears are working* I can't wait for the next chapter, especially the SessKagInu triangle. Great job, Jeff!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Great chapter. I can see a conclusion coming between the triangle. But what is to happen? If Kagome gets the souls of her family back, then Inu Yasha will die and go to hell with Kikyo. And if she doesn't she will lose her families souls forever. I don't see anything wrong in the story. I think the decline of the reviews can be due to anything. But it is a good story. Keep up the excellente work, Jeff.
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Reviewed By: faerie demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
FontColor You are evil. How could you kill all those people and melt down Fluffy's sword! I have to admit that even though you're evil, you're damned brillant.
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Reviewed By: Rommel17 not signed in On: July 10, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... Going strong.
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