| "Ryou's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Title: AutumnRose
Reviewed By: AutumnRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this!!! Keep up the good work and update soon. Please! Oh and by the way, a Sexual Sadist dream come true is called a Masochist. Bakura - a masochist is a person who derives pleasure or sexual gratification from being abused or dominated. Ryou - Don't be daft 'Kura, the authoress already knows that.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: October 25, 2004 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fun! *grins evilly* I can't wait for the next ch, so fun. Toying with their minds hmm, how interesting. Really great story. Ud soon. See ya.
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Reviewed By: Kirei (not logged in) On: October 25, 2004 14:42 CDT
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Awwww! >< Damn cliffies!!!! Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 21:13 CDT
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S&M and messing with their minds. Ahh, what more do I need? *smirks* Lovely evil plan... please update soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 19:13 CDT
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I can`t wait for more of this. Stop teasing everybody and get on with it. These two are so hot in this. I can`t get enough of them.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper (not logged in) On: September 26, 2004 14:54 CDT
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Hm, guess that means I'm partially a sexual sadist... anyway, I think it wouldn't be so bad if u switched to a 3rd Person's POV for a chapter or two. And once again, write B, write B!! Want more lemons...
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 13:29 CDT
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/YES/~!!! BAKURA IS /UKE/! [Jumps up and down] OMGWTFLOLBBQ THAT WAS GREAT! XD I can't WAIT to see more R/B action and to see Yugi's reaction...Will we see Malik and Marik? (I bet they're rough, too...[blushes] I can't believe I just said that.) I'll await your next update patiently!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: September 25, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sado/masochist, Ryou gets to be seme for once, And Bakura/Ryou pairing. Very intriguing story. Great components! I definitely like the variation from the other stories. They fit eachother perfectly. I say, a stupid teacher wanders there and Bakura gets to send him/her to the shadow realm. Mwahahahahaha! lol. Ud soon. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:55 CDT
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Masochist and sadists... god, they make such a perfect couple. 'The door opens' again(I think.) Damn cliffhanger. Must stab. Anyway, love! Much love! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 19:01 CDT
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Love it Update NOW! I want another lemon! So I choose B For the thingy. Again Update Now or atleast soon. Thankies ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kirei (not logged in) On: September 23, 2004 15:30 CDT
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i havent reviewed in awhile huh? anyways, i liked the new chappie as well as the entire story! ^_^ update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Neko_Katakura On: September 20, 2004 22:32 CDT
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B...would be nice....more lemon! ^^ hee hee...naughty thoughts...
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Reviewed By: zork On: September 10, 2004 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like B
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Reviewed By: Leech On: September 03, 2004 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this, keep on writing, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I don't know who should barge in, I'm torn between a and b, both sound good.
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Reviewed By: soundofclapping On: August 31, 2004 11:41 CDT
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I like 'a' myself. Don't try to rush through the chapter. You come out sounding like you aren't beathing at all.
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