| "Dreams do come true" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitana_is_number_one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So you left the greatest story i've read today alone for three years and haven't updated. Shame shame.
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Title: um
Reviewed By: BAKA_MAI On: February 10, 2005 14:05 CST
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um are you going to update anytime soon, because i really like your story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: AndreahTreole [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 17:43 CDT
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You haven't updated in months?! HOW DARE YOU! Update quickly or you won't see you 30th birthday! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA..... nevermind that, I won't hurt you... but please, Update soon. I don't think that my poor 'heart' could take the suspense....
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 18:17 CDT
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I got one thing to say. HURRY THE HELL UP? OK YOU HAVE WRITER'S BLOCK!?! YOU COULD ATLEAST WRITE AN AUTHORS NOTE TELLING US YOUR STILL THINKING ABOUT IT ATLEAST. I MEAN C'MON YOU LEAVE YOUR READERS HANGIN LIKE THIS!?!?! WHATS WRONG WITH YOU?!??!?! HURRY YOUR ASS UP!. Ok I'm good. sry for all the yelling and the language. but seriously update soon. and i mean soon. ^_^ Please and thank you
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Reviewed By: Yalene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's that? Last update on July 20th? What's going on? I want a continuation of this masterpiece of written work! I read this story four whole times so far and now I am wondering if there would be something new, so I could read it over and over again (what with a high possibility is going to happen even without a new chapter ^,^'). So please, if there is a god and a author willing to end the tortur of his subserviant readers, let this story continue! Byebye, Yalene ^,^
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Reviewed By: hi On: September 22, 2004 12:32 CDT
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I like the story so far, i cant wait to see what happens next...i know you are probably busy and have writers block, but try your best to come back! (trust me, i know what its like...im stuck with one of my stories too...) anyway...Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:04 CDT
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Please, please, please continue. I really like your story, and I want to see how Kagome manages to save InuYasha.
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Reviewed By: Yalene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 14:54 CDT
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Ok, what can I say otherwise than that I am practically dying to read the next chapter? I know! I love this story and your style of writing. Keep going. I will look forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, though you might want to check some grammar errors, especially the difference between 'of' and 'off'. But still, great job, I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: mojop On: August 24, 2004 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't end it like that!!!!!!!! I mean what was the real reason the kept Kagome tied to a promise like that?! Pllllleeeeaaaassssee update! I love it, though :)! Good job!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey noticed your last update was July 20th, I think that's the last update, I wouldn't know my comuter is so damn slow to update stories, it sucks, but if that is the last one, WHY THE HELL ARENT YOU UPDATING? I MEAN IS IT TOO MUCH. YOU DO HAVE PEOPLE WHO LIKE THIS STORY, JUST WARNING YOU. UPDATE NOW!!!!! Oh and I love the story, I am, of course a sess/rin pairing lover but hey sess/kag is good also. But UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel horrible. I've been reading this story for like forever and I just realized I haven't even given you a reiview I guess that's a little selfish. I love your story it's well thought out and the one thing that kept me mesmorized was the line from "Stay the night part 2": Her words flooded him like hot oil, fueling the flames that burnt deep inside. That was simply ingenous. I'm sorry for typing such a long reiview I guess I'm known for that. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: shywaii_gurl On: July 25, 2004 20:43 CDT
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ahhhhhh this is a good fic! dont stop its really getting somewhere! keep updating!
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Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 01:47 CDT
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whoa
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 20:11 CDT
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I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, please update soon ^.^ Shy
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 20, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have your inspiration right here! This always seems to get me motivated. http://content.collegehumor.com/media/movies/starbucks-nometa.mov hehehehe Just insert your name when they say 'Glen' and 'Roy' ! I liked the chapter, it wasn't stupid =P Gotta love 2 pissed off brothers, hehe. I like how Mr. Yung pisses him self when ever he gets scared. I bet he wrecks a lot of pants that way, and chair, to say the least. Does Hojo piss himself too? Or maybe worse? hahaha. Bad bad writers block, go away! Anywho, Loved the chapter, love the story; keep on keepin' on! ---Autumn
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signedin On: July 14, 2004 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ouuuuuuuuuuuuuu. one word: good.. wait.. no.. GREAT! two pissed off brothers= not good, lol. sorry for the short review, will write more later. loved it! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: killthetoaddemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 03:09 CDT
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uh oh demons are on the loose... ^__^ Bye bye evil! I like the story, update soon!
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 11:24 CDT
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i love it please update soon
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Reviewed By: PJ On: July 08, 2004 00:30 CDT
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I like this fic please update with new chapters soon. I look forward to reading this fic everyday
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Title: WOW WOW WOW...why do i bother with titles? dotn answer that
Reviewed By: inuyasha loves me aint bothering to sign in On: July 07, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and i was 8 months old too when i started taking and i didnt have a first word...I had a first sentence! Aisterua nesi Reika-nee-chan. which translates into I love you my wonder big sister Reika! Oh Im Japanese by the way!!!!! And i live your stpry it is so sweet!!!!! And kawii!!!!!!!! GOOD WORK AND PLEASE UP DATE OR WHATEVER SOON Jane ne Americans spell Japanese stuff weird....InuYasha loves me! AKA Kagome Yarbrough
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 21:37 CDT
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Whoa! I didn't say I couldn't stand your story anymore! I like your story! I said I could not stand to keep quiet anymore and pointed out a very small error in word usage. I really did not mean to make you upset and I am sorry that I did not make myself clear. The educator in me forces me to mentally correct papers even when the paper does not belong to a student. Don't sweat it! You have a fine story and considering the length, a few typos are expected here and there. Now take a deep breath and repeat after me, "They love my story! They love my story! They love my story!" Feel better? I hope so....
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Reviewed By: Aitu- NOT signed IN On: July 06, 2004 16:09 CDT
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ahahahahahahaha. I'm still laughing at the "Where do babies come from" bit. Especially the plotting that Sesshoumaru did with Sorano, muhahaha. And so the plot thickens as well as my interest for this story! Keep on keepin' on! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: July 06, 2004 13:42 CDT
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Yeah, Sessoumaru & Rin are officially together!But I feel sorry for what Sess will do to Kagura & Kanna if he meets them. No one pisses Sess off & gets away with it. I hope Inu doesn't get hurt by the assasin. That would be too aggravating.
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Reviewed By: Brennen_Sie_Drachen-not signed in On: July 06, 2004 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read one chapter and my computer died. I was soooo sad. But it's fixed now so I am very very happy ^_^ Now I can read your story again! Yay for me! I love it...keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- do I ever sign in? On: July 05, 2004 22:22 CDT
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Oh wow, that was priceless, in the begining, hehehehe. Ah, a child's innocence. Too bad that never lasts. Now what happens if she can recall these memories from her child hood? lol. I really like your whole spin on the mating mark thingie. It's a nice change from the whole biting of the neck deal. Well, this reviewer is sleepy and will now be going to bed. Buhh-Byeee --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 05, 2004 17:48 CDT
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Hot damn! hehehe. That was good. Sorry for not reviewing sooner! I was on a short holiday with the friends at their summer condo. But what a great present to come back to! hehehe, 2 chapters of goody goodness, lol. (That's not really word) Keep up the good work my friend! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Koof On: July 05, 2004 11:14 CDT
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O_o the plot thickens...dun dun DUN! i knew the assasin was gonna be Naraku..i mean come on, who else fits better in being a cold hearted murderer than him..cept for Sesshou, but he is way too hot! anywayz, keep it up girl!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i just finished reading your story and i have no word it was amazing i was captured...well i love it...and i just have no words you have left me speachless and that saying a lot...i talk way to much for my own good..lol...well update soon cuz i love the fic....Ja ne
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: July 03, 2004 18:47 CDT
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great lemon =) i like it wen kagome is all forward cuz u c enuff of the shy her on tv lol n ur rite it sucks that shes always compared to the dead bitch...i mean kikyo...=P great chapter
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