| "Dreams do come true" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Katana14 (not logged in) On: July 03, 2004 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo....Naughty, naughty Kag! Tsk, tsk, what would your mother say? She'd say 'I had better see at least five grandchildren!' That's what she'd say! LOL! Continue please! I can't wait to hear about what Sorano says about the whole situation!... Oh no... I hear that birds and the bees talk again...KYAAA! *shudders in fear, hiding behind couch* Just kidding! Come on, write more please!
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Reviewed By: Koofy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man, ur story keeps on getting better and better! i really wanna kick Mr, Yung's ass....he infuriates me so much! But the last couple of chapters were, how can i say this, perfect!....keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: July 02, 2004 10:42 CDT
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tsk tsk inuyasha she's engaged u no...n shame on u kag tho i can kinda understand cuz inu is ten times hotter than hojo lol. great chapter!
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Title: hehehehe
Reviewed By: Aitu-- oh guess what.. NOT SIGNED IN On: July 02, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeaaaaaaaaa!!! Go Inuyash! lol I just feel like giggling right now (You're probably thinking, when aren't you giggling?) *Giggles profusely* I loved the 2 newest chapters with all my heart! It's just amazing-- the speed at which you update. Sora's such a sweetie, you just can't help but love the girl. Okay, time for this girl to goto bed or maybe start studying for that Final that's tomorrow >.< Nite Nite and see ya next update! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: kawaii doggie ears On: July 02, 2004 00:59 CDT
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well i already rated it so im not going to do it again=D. but i agree with you, when ppl see the rating as 'r' or 'nc-17' there all like wheres the sex? Erg its anoying. not all of them are porn!Some have plots! lol sorry but one of my reviewers said stuff and i needed to vent it off-_-' well its been a good couple of chappys and i must say i check for an update etleast 15 times a day! lol its not my fault you made it so damn good.LAMO my fav chappy has to be when he yelled out the wrong name. that was just funnie. well thats all my gaddering. ja ne Shelly
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Title: This is just too cool!
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! The plot is awesome! And you're a great writer at the fluff scences! The whole story is highly detailed! It's too cool to be on this sight! I can't wait for part 2 of it!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 22:49 CDT
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Please keep the chapters coming! I like this fic!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: July 01, 2004 14:37 CDT
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stupid hojos dad....ruinin everything...good chapter =D
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- never signed in.. EVER! On: July 01, 2004 13:56 CDT
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hahahaha- Ah, the end. That was great! Now have him get caught, lol. Well this number one fan says that the story keeps on getting better and better and still, even to this day, makes me want to read more and more and more and more. (Yes, I am going a little bit over board here but oh well) *Gives you a purple Icey* Yummy yummy. Eat this while you make another chapter! (I think that counts as a bribe?) hehehe --Your biggest fan ever, Aitu
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow me like this story alot so keep goin and update soon. me would write more stuff on how good u r but me is tired it is 2:20 here and me has not been gettin much sleep so till u updata later u will have to do with this...till me is more awake. (u know me could have use the time i told u me was sleep by tellin u ur really good and i love ur story) oh i gusse me told u now so me is goin to bed now it now 2:22 so nite nite and laterz 4 now
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: June 29, 2004 21:54 CDT
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grrr hate mr yung! heres one tiny lil thing i noticed but this is def not a flame. i really like this story too much to flame it. i noticed the tense is in the present but sometimes it slips to past. just watch that. two great chapters! =D (just incase u didnt no NSI means not signed in. )
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Reviewed By: Aitu- never ever signed in On: June 29, 2004 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! more than one chapter in one day!! It's like we won a prize or something =P YEY! I'm so happy, hehehe. The evil man can soak in his own pee and leave Kagome alone! Now that him and Hobo are outa the way there can be a lil' *giggles* you know what! yey! Make more chapters soooon pleeease. Your faithful #1 Fan, Aitu LOL
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in, again On: June 29, 2004 13:33 CDT
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NUMBER ONE FAN EVER!!! lol. Great chapter again! I don't even think I can pick a favorite part out; ither the "hugging" game, or definitly when Mr. Yung pee's himself, hehehe. I'm officially addicted to the story and want to read more. I agree with the other person who said you should get a prize. Keep up the amazing work and make more chapters soon puuulllleeeeeaaaassseee! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: June 29, 2004 12:04 CDT
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Jeez, poor Kagome getting beat up by Hojo's father. I feel sorry for him because now he has to deal with Inuyasha AND Sesshoumaru. NOT GOOD because they are pissed. Hope you update soon so we can see how that turns out.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: June 29, 2004 11:26 CDT
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that was SWEET!!!!!!!!!!! i loved that chapter! omg! that bastard hit kagome?!?!?!?!?! he has no right to hit kagome....but inuyasha will take care of him...right? *grins evilly* i can't wait until your next chapter!
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