| "Dreams do come true" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aitu- never ever signed in On: June 29, 2004 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! more than one chapter in one day!! It's like we won a prize or something =P YEY! I'm so happy, hehehe. The evil man can soak in his own pee and leave Kagome alone! Now that him and Hobo are outa the way there can be a lil' *giggles* you know what! yey! Make more chapters soooon pleeease. Your faithful #1 Fan, Aitu LOL
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in, again On: June 29, 2004 13:33 CDT
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NUMBER ONE FAN EVER!!! lol. Great chapter again! I don't even think I can pick a favorite part out; ither the "hugging" game, or definitly when Mr. Yung pee's himself, hehehe. I'm officially addicted to the story and want to read more. I agree with the other person who said you should get a prize. Keep up the amazing work and make more chapters soon puuulllleeeeeaaaassseee! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: June 29, 2004 12:04 CDT
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Jeez, poor Kagome getting beat up by Hojo's father. I feel sorry for him because now he has to deal with Inuyasha AND Sesshoumaru. NOT GOOD because they are pissed. Hope you update soon so we can see how that turns out.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: June 29, 2004 11:26 CDT
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that was SWEET!!!!!!!!!!! i loved that chapter! omg! that bastard hit kagome?!?!?!?!?! he has no right to hit kagome....but inuyasha will take care of him...right? *grins evilly* i can't wait until your next chapter!
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Title: totaly awsome!
Reviewed By: Kawaii doggie ears On: June 29, 2004 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* that is so awsome *looks at author with stary eyes* please update soon. i really cant wait to find out how kagome explains her "situation" too Inu. i love it when hes over protective!*sigh* he is so sexy......well if your still reading this review you shouldent be cuz you should be working on the next chapter! ja ne shelly
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Reviewed By: brittany On: June 29, 2004 00:49 CDT
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hope he dies!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-not signed in On: June 28, 2004 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh I'm still ridiculously excited about this story! It's so fresh and so new and just plain good! hehehe. Wow you update fast-- and that's a good thing! I bet Inuyasha is gunna wish that he didn't save those lives? hehe Keep up the amazing work! -Aitu
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Reviewed By: Koofy On: June 28, 2004 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i love your story! wow, its so original and suspensful! i always get this stupid grin plastered on my face when i read ur story..and sorano is just too cute! ah i love her!....and just to let u know, ur the 1st person that i review to on MM.org...and its been 2 years that ive been readin fanfics on Mediaminer!.....i honestly think u totally deserve a prize anyway, just to let u know....its College...not Collage. hehe thats all! Keep up the awesome work! update soon!
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoys muchly!!!! Daniy Jinx
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 20:12 CDT
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lol ur first word was clock? that is strange lol but it cracked me up. i love your story. it's so cute n i dont think i've seen anyone do this before. great idea!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 18:21 CDT
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i loved the story and i really liked the twist with yura or whatever her name was! i can't wait until you updated!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yey oh yey oh yey! hehehe. It's meeeeeeeee! And the story is now on the favorites list! woohoo! Now it will tell me when there's new chapters. SNAP! But anyway- Great chapter! I hearted it a lot. Sano's soo cute, aww. Please write more chapters soon! I'll be waiting! but not in that creepy stalker sort of way, lol --Aitu
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Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 16:58 CDT
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Portraying Inu as a caring father is very interesting and I'm greatly enjoying your fic so far. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. ^_^
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Reviewed By: brie On: June 28, 2004 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed reading this...its very original and fun to read!
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 04:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...this is a great fanfic..i was wonderin wen kagome was gonna come in and then POOF...here she somes..haha..wow...inuyasha seems like a really good daddy huh?..lol..this fanfic is great and i cant wait to read more of it...
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