| "True Feelings Get In The Way" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 00:36 CDT
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hey, you take all the time you need we all can wait , and i hope your mom gets better. :) daniy jinx
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 19:21 CDT
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Hope your mom gets better! Thanks for the lemon.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD SO FAR
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 22:12 CDT
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^_^;
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Title: go you!!!!
Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 22:10 CDT
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so glad you continued it!!!! keep up the good work!! Update soon please :) dank, daniy jinx
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Title: Trying to get MM.org to let me review!!!!
Reviewed By: Michi-chan6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you decided to keep writing this fanfic! It made my day! Update soon!!! Ja ne Umm ya if my review shows up 5 times it is b/c mm.org and I aren't getting along. It keeps telling me that I have missing information. -starts pulling out hair- ok this is the third time I'm trying to send this review!!! Ok maybe fourth time's a charm
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 17:32 CDT
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Oh party time! update soon.
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Title: Keep Going!
Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you should keep writing. It's not as bad as you may think!! If all of us gave up just because we think it sucks then for certain i would delete my fic cause my grammar sucks and i mean really sucks, but hey! that doesn't mean i can't keep writing. Not everybody has been born with the capacity to write, and you'll see that you will improve a lot from the first chapters as you go on. So don't give up so easily! Nice first chapter, and I really hope you will go on, if not, I'll see you in your next fic. :)
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I think you should continue on this one. It started out SO great!! I think you should continue on so you get practice from your first ones then you can make you next stories more better. I think this story is already great. I love it aloready. I was hooked on the first sentence!!!! Just please continue!!! PLEASE! Oh by the way I love how you put labels like the Iversons and the 2004 Lexus and stuff, that is cool! *thumbs up* My older brother is hooked on cars and shoes and its rubbin off on me. I like how you put labels instead of like 'red shoes' or a 'red car'. I liked that. :) It's GREAT SO KEEP ON WRITING...CONTINUING THIS STORY!!!! PLEASE continue!!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 12:58 CDT
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I like this story alot!! Please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 23:39 CDT
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u shuld still keep on writin dis story because it can help you with your writin thingy that u said u needed to work on so y not work on it while doin ur story?..as long as we can read it and understand it...it seems great to me..
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue the story. :) its really good, i think your writing skills are fine (and don't let anybody tell you different!)my writing skills got better as i wrote, with the help of my editor of course *pulls editor into big hug* i loves my editor! *ahem* sorry i'm really hyper, anyways keep writing the fic, i want to read what happens next. danke, daniy jinx
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Title: plz dont leave
Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE THIS STORY PRETTY PLEASE BEGS and WHIMPERS LIKE A DOG HEHE
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THINK YOU SHOULD CONINUE THIS STORY
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Reviewed By: Michi-Chan6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 16:58 CDT
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You already know that I think you should continue this story. True you maybe new to writing but what better way to improve your skills than to post what you write for others to comment on? I think that you don't write like someone who hasn't written before...Have you seen some of the stories posted on ff.net? They make yours look like a pro wrote them. I hope you continue this fanfic. Ja ne
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