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Reviewed By: roseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
update
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Title: Leaving
Reviewed By: Moon LaFleur On: March 16, 2005 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excelent fic and I do so hope you continue it my dear. May your muse smile upon you so that we all may enjoy the tales you weave.
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Reviewed By: Serenity Kemeia Wintirs On: September 14, 2004 01:20 CDT
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The song goes; I wish I was lonely, instead of just only, crystal and see through and not enough to you
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Reviewed By: roseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 09:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
ove it update
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Reviewed By: PJ On: August 20, 2004 03:02 CDT
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Cool update this is a great story. You have me real curious as to what happens that they wanted to prevent and then she wouldn't let them tell her. And it seems like Inuyasha like you said in the last chapter regets not choosing her. I am also surprised that Sessy didn't force Inuyasha (future) to go through the well and stop what ever it is. I am surprised that Inu didn't go through the well and stop himself 'rejecting' Kagome. Update again soon this is a great story
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your fic. My favorites ones are Kag/ Sess! THanks for writing such a good one- keep it up!!!! And soon please.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter and I love the part where Miroku turned to Sango and put his hand on her breast. "Infect!" That just had me laughing. I can so picture him doing that ^__^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans. Love the story. Keep up the great work.
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Title: GREAT STORY
Reviewed By: spdswyf On: August 11, 2004 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I'm just need to find out how she changes and why does she leave! I love how you have this relationship with Sess and Kags, it may seem a little fast, but it is all coming together so well!! Keep those capters coming, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting! :)
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV THIS Fanfic i hope that sesshoumaru and kagome end up happy in the end and everyone else i hope the issue with what happens in the past isn't to awful just as long as they find happyness then its all good hehe update soon okaies ^-^ JA NE
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 04:09 CDT
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Whoa. So what happens? Does Sess knock her up and leave her? And she becomes a victim by some other person or demon, aka Naraku? Or does Naraku find out about them and does something? Does he kidnap her and rape her to brake her spirt? Does he kill Kaede? Does he kill an innocent child in front of her, because of her? Btw speaking of innocent child, where is Rin? If Miroku and Sango are alive then why isn't she? Is that why he leaves her? Cause Rin gets hurt? Love the story. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Hope mom is okay
Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your mom is okay ^_^ take as much time as u need your mom is more important ^_^ hugz Ja NE
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 04:08 CDT
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wow... this fic is awsome... i dont even mind the fact of how fast you've made the relation ship go (you know how some authors speed through and stuff like that)... normally that bugs me! but your doing a great job on this fic! well done! anyways please write another chappie soon! i cant wait to read it!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 00:14 CDT
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Wow. Great chapter. Absolutely love the story. Keep up the excellente work.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I LOVE THIS FANFIC tears cant wait for more ^_^
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