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Reviewed By: CriscoKittie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 18:14 PDT
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I was so excited to see that you had written a new chapter! I relish in the fact that you updated so quickly. Keep up the good work! I hope Kagome remembers something soon!
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Title: Another great chapter
Reviewed By: BakaBokken (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 17:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heehee, you're quite welcome again! =D I very much enjoyed chatting on AIM with you last night, and I hope we continue to have great conversations! Anyway, another excellent chapter... and a bit steamy too ^^;; Then again, this is rated R, so no surprises there! ~_^ I think I'm liking the white dog, too, and I look forward to seeing what deeper role it has to play! Great set-up, and I can tell you have some very exciting things planned for this story! Keep it up! =D
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Reviewed By: Haunt On: August 10, 2004 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, VERY interesting idea. I like how you keep everyone to their character as well as you can, considering that Kagome lost her memories. The dog strikes me as odd, and I'm guessing that perhaps it may be Midoriko..? Well, this chapter was funny XD Sesshy with little kids!! Bwahaha! And I liked the sweet bit of fluffiness between Inu and Kagome...vurry nice. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 13:42 PDT
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That chapter was fun! Thanks for the laugh...the tone lightened a bit...I am trying to picture Sesshoumaru frazzled with children! hehehe.
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: August 10, 2004 13:33 PDT
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I still love your story!! It's great!! I like it alot! Update soon!
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Title: 100th review!
Reviewed By: Tashin H [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 06:46 PDT
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Just because I saw that my last review was # 99, I decided to leave you another one. YAY! the hundredth mark has been passed! Go celebrate!
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Reviewed By: Tashin H [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 06:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading for a while now, and haven't review-I'm new to Media miner, and I didn't know how to! This is an excellant story-I like how you've taken a familiar fic idea and made it special without taking too many liberties with the characters. I admire your ability to update regulary too-too many of us authors have big issues with that:) Congratulations on getting featured! * Style-you have a distinct one-instant 10:) Spelling-occassional mistakes. Originality- familiar idea, unique output Enjoyment- Very easy to read-it keeps reader's attention throughout the whole chapter. Overall I compromised with the other ratings:)
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Title: Heehee
Reviewed By: BakaBokken (not signed in) On: August 10, 2004 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course, I'm honored that I was able to make your day, Sueric! ^__^ It was an honor to speak with you as well! You have a fantastic story going here, and I only noted one very minor typo in this last chapter. (Yeah, I finally caught up! WooHoo!) Anyway, thanks again for the lovely chat via AIM, and I look forward to reading more of this (and to future chats)! Keep it up! ^__^ ~Baka
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Reviewed By: akuma_river *not signed in stupid mm* [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 23:48 PDT
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I like the chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: galene On: August 09, 2004 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, i can see why it'd be on the featured list. the fic is AMAZING! one of my favs (well what i've read so far has stuck it there) *laughs* keep up the truely awesome work ~galene
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 22:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good chapter ! I liked it a lot please update soon !!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 22:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good chapter ! I liked it a lot please update soon !!
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Title: Me again!
Reviewed By: BakaBokken [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey again, Sueric! ^^; I just finished chatting with you via AIM, and I just now read the "Suds-n-Bubbles" chapter! You weren't kidding-- that was SOOO cute! I absolutely loved the fluff! Great work, and I'm looking forward to reading the next couple of chapters! I'll ttyl! =D
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Reviewed By: CriscoKittie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story, now my only request it that you up date as soon as possible! ~ CriscoKittie
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Reviewed By: Gloria Underhill On: August 09, 2004 16:46 PDT
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I'm really enjoying this story, I especially like how you're handling Kagome "knowing" InuYasha even if she doesn't consciously remember him. I want to let you know of a perception that I've gotten, in case I'm mistaken. Now I know that Kagome has basically just started to come to terms with her crush, or whatever, but it seems to me that she still feels overshadowed by the woman that forgot InuYasha. (I got that from the tear scene). That's fine if that is where you're going. I just wanted to tell you that and encourage you to keep writeing.
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