| "Purity" Reviews/Comments [ 467 ] |
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 21:13 PDT
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great fic
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Title: god
Reviewed By: bethie On: August 05, 2004 20:19 PDT
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LOL I LOVE U THIS STORY IS THE SHIT OF ALL OMG PLEASE WRITE AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE LOL LOL I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA UPDATE UPDATE PLEASEEEEEE LOL LOL ^_^ LOVE YA bethie(lunar_storm) ^_^(sorry it took me so long to coment ive been gone for a while ^_^)
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Title: !!!
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 19:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally review fanfiction on this sight, yes I know what your thinking, your thinking that I am horible, but it's the truth, come to think of it I think this is my first reveiw here on this sight, well anyway, excellent chapter! The kiss was perfect, I really liked how you did the whole gentle touch and kiss, I have never read a fanfiction where their first kiss was like that. So keep up the good work!
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Title: \
Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: August 05, 2004 16:25 PDT
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Interesting. So they didn't do it? Interesting. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chap, i realy like your writing style and its realy original too, cant wait for the next chap,update soon:)
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 12:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was awesome! I can't wait to see what happens when they have to go to school... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Oh, and what'll Koug- I mean, what'll Hojo do? Man, he's gonna get his a** whooped by Inuyasha! Yeah! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: August 05, 2004 09:36 PDT
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ill give u 10 reviews! lol cept they'd all say the same thing ur an amazing author n i love this story. that kiss was awesome!!
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 07:18 PDT
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That was a really sweet chapter!! However, the whole situation about Inu being her teacher is still a little strange. Are you going to address that in the next chap? And, how different are their ages now? Just curious... Anywho, great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bobbit On: August 04, 2004 23:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfic I have ever read. Thanks a lot. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 22:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
I realy like reading your story I think you should put up the next chapter so i can read it so i hope you put it up sooooo.
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Reviewed By: sinead On: August 03, 2004 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!! he kissed her awww!!!! hey btw is miroku and sango alive in this era? anyway, answer it next time and keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields On: August 03, 2004 00:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::butterflies in stomach:: Those last 3 chapters were awesome. I love how you're implementing the story of the Shikon no Tama and making it useful. IY is in such pain! It really saddens me to know that he's in tears over Kags because she can't remember.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: August 02, 2004 09:34 PDT
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awwww that was so sweet and so cute n so sad!!!! wow ur really great at writing out emotions. i can practically feel it. wonderful job
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: August 02, 2004 09:26 PDT
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lol white shirts n bubbles dont mix..=P
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 16:17 PDT
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Ooh. Kagome's falling in love. Good chapter. Keep up the good work.
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