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Reviewed By: Chan_girl On: July 11, 2004 03:37 CDT
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I think you should continue both version. O loved the 1st version, because Heero was so damn cool and sexy with Duo. The 1st fic was really good! This one is good too. It has a deeper plot and long description. Duo seems much more important. So can you continue the 1st fic too while doing this one ? Please!!!
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Title: I like ch.4
Reviewed By: Sanam Jan On: July 10, 2004 07:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked the Original form from "Dark Deceptions" very much and at first I thought that I don't like the reversion as much as the Original version but after reading chapter four, which was to my liking, I came to the conclusion that I maight like the reversion as much as the initial version after all. I'm looking forward for more of it altho I wish you'd continue the old version as well as this one.
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Reviewed By: yelan On: July 10, 2004 07:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet! The way you describe the action sequences (espescially with Duo and his scythe!) is truely amazing! I love it!
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Reviewed By: catangel On: July 10, 2004 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i prefer this 1 than the other fic that u write about dark deception. b'cos this story shown duo to be mysteries and more of his style and character.
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: July 09, 2004 21:36 CDT
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I really like both stories. I think that you should continue with both of them. It is so cool. Have the first one and the second one both going at the same time see what story brings back more. I loved the lemon you wrote and the way they react in the first one and love the added extra plot in the second one. The first one you can make Duo someting like a half Carpathian and not knowing it he meets the King and realizes he is his uncle. Duo's finds out his father married the Kings sister, Helen. Solo is the prince and he and Duo have know each other since they were small. Duo thought he died when a vampire attached Helen and Duo's dad and severly hurt Solo. Duo thought all his family died and Solo and the King thought Duo died when the vampire attaced. For the second I am stil not certain about what you should write but it is real good as well.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: unicorn1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. Keep writting i cannot wait to find out what happenes. I like both this version and the other one, but this one is a little bit more detailed. Keep writting either one. ^_^
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: DeathsAngel1816 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't tell you how much I love this story! And I mean LOVE this sotry. The plot, the characters and everything are perfect. I was glued to my seat the entire time I was reading this. So you better write more and soon, please. I will be impatiently awaiting an update.
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