"Dark Deceptions Revised" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 12:41 CST Comment/Review: That's it? That's IT? On no you didn't... You have t get back on this. It's hot and wonderful and Heero is so damn... oooh... and Duo, don't get me started! Great story, but MORE!!
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Reviewed By: dragonborn_crystal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 19:33 CDT Comment/Review: This is much better than the last one and all I can say is please update. I will most certainly be reading any updates.
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Title: Would you please . . .? Reviewed By: Joh Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 12:35 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Would you please update this story? I want to know what happens next! ^^
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Reviewed By: hey there On: May 21, 2005 01:22 CDT Comment/Review: come on update please! I'm beging here! @_@
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Reviewed By: seamaidian On: May 13, 2005 20:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ok, i love this fic. i have read one of feehan's books and i think this is way better (dont tell her that). i hope you are still working on this fic. thanks for the great story.
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Title: Are you going to finish this one?? Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat~not logged On: December 09, 2004 06:53 CST Comment/Review: Please, please say tht you will continue this little tid bit. I really enjoyed reading so far.
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Title: FULLY SICK MATE Reviewed By: Antichrist Child; Reaper of Blood On: November 24, 2004 08:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i only use that phrase because im a wog and i can........ your story is fully sick.... please add more...pretty pretty please
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 23:33 CDT Comment/Review: *sniffles* I hope you update this fic soon!
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Reviewed By: S..D. On: September 17, 2004 17:26 CDT Comment/Review: I know that I have already reviewed your stories but please I beg of you please post more chapters. I have your previous chapters printed out to read when ever I want but the story is incomplete! Please post the rest! ;-) Spirit Dragon
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Reviewed By: Soldier of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 14:53 CDT Comment/Review: Wow.. I actually like Relena in this story of yours... Thats an incredible feat considering I hate her guts and condemn her to all seven hells... anyways I love your story! You neeed to update sooon or... else... *shifty eyes*
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Reviewed By: jennie1799 On: August 11, 2004 16:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've read some of the books and read your first draft. I like this revised version better than both. The depth of the characters and the complexity of the plot are awesome. Keep up the good work and I hope for an update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 19:08 CDT Comment/Review: Monday I'm going to go look for her books, how'd ya feel about Anne Rice? *sniffles, searches virtual room for update then peeks underneath the bed and squeaks. Pouts for update*
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Reviewed By: S.D. On: July 31, 2004 18:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, hell I read the real books and they sure as hell ain't this good. Damn! Please continue!!! Thanks, Spirit Dragon
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Reviewed By: QuatreAngel On: July 27, 2004 20:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WHAAAAAAAAAAA! When are you gonna put part 10 up? *sniffle sniffle* I am really really loving this, and I wanna see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: DeathsAngel1816 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 02:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's too bad that the rating system only goes up to ten. This story deserves way more than that. For, the character's personalities are perfect, the plot is beyond words and I love the complexity to it. I also enjoy the wonderful love triangles that you have. I can't wait to see how they play out in the end. Okay, what I am really trying to say is that: I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
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