| "As Deemed By Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Title: OOOMG
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 On: October 07, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE TELL ME THERES MORE!!!! I PICKED THIS STORY UP TODAY AND DIDN'T STOP TIL I RAN OUT OF CHAPTERS....IT'S JUST TO GOOD TO STOP NOW THERE MUST BE UPDATES!!!!\"OMG\" Had to read it twice it was that good!!!! It plays like a movie in your mind.... I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS,
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: October 05, 2006 08:21 CDT
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I like the story so far, it's really got meaning to it and I like that factor. The way you type, has me hooked to this story. I can't wait for the next chapter though I don't know when you'll be posting. Well I gots to go, I'm going to read another fanfic before I have classes. Well Happy writings and a Merry Muse.
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Title: Chapters 1-8
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you've set up the plot so far since it's abound with mystery and intrigue. I also like the contrast between Kagome and Kikyou. At first I missed the demon/miko stuff but I got used to it. ;) Your chapter length is perfect making each chapter equally worth the read. I love how Kagome is slowly cracking the shell Inuyasha has built around his past and family life. I can only hope it'll get better but I know it'll get messy when Kikyou finds out about the new living arrangement, lol. I truly hope Inu and Kags end up together since in your story they really seem to click. I also hope for Inu/Kag because Kikyou doesn't love Inu like she should and doesn't appreciate him at all. I feel so bad for him because he's completely oblivious. I hope you update soon with another great chapter that I look forward to reading! ^^
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style of writing. It is very good. I cant wait to see how you accually bring these two closer. But I will be watching a waiting for your updates to read. Thanks so much for writing this story and keeping me happily entertained. lol. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Charlee On: September 30, 2006 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font ColorYa know it gets harder everyday to find a story u enjoy reading...it took me forever to find yours...i love it! I wish there were mor authors out there like you! I could picture every event in my head and that makes a fantatic story it's almost like a movie...Update soon...make the next one even better! -Charlee (luvible_kisses17@ahoo.com)
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Title: coool
Reviewed By: awesomesave.. On: February 19, 2006 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmm AWESOME im glad u updated...i love this story ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT, just one thing perplexes me?? why do u use the word "save" i duno if its some writing style or w/e =p but isnt it supposed to be "except" like everything was cool except his face" everything was cool save his face?? i duno something like that u do in ur story...update sooon =)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 14, 2006 18:36 CST
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Magnificent chapter, as always. Nice to see Inuyasha is opening up a ittle, even if he is still concealing who he is from her. But, it would seem that she is doing the same. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: OHS On: February 14, 2006 16:47 CST
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GREAT STORY! Can't wait till the next chap! whats the deal with families?? I dont like kikyo...yeah i know im kinda random so get over it. I cant log in......so if i do this again i'll sign it OHS...Ookami Hime Suriya
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(nsi) On: February 14, 2006 16:38 CST
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Yay!! Update! ^_^ Really nice chapter. Hope you update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: February 13, 2006 23:55 CST
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iNUYASHA KNOWS HOW TO COOK. I would have never guessed? Kagome doesn't know tht he is restoring her house. She not going to let him just spend his money on her. She going to want to pay him back. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cockitpullit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 18:22 CST
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one word for ya update =)
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Title: awsum
Reviewed By: cockitpullit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo man, this is awwesome I love this story good job college boy =] jokes its really good and its pretty funny hope you update sooon
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! ^_^ great chapter! can't wait for more! Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: December 24, 2005 14:53 CST
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Magnificent chapter. So, what will this mean for the two of them... I hope college works out. Good luck, best wishes, merry christmas and happy new year! Hououza
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 01:35 CST
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How could someone do that to a holy place. Inuyasha sure came in a hurry even when Kagome said she didn't need him. Not she going to stay at his place. That's like giving Kikyo a reason to yell at Inuyasha. Ican't wait to see what happens next.
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