| "At Odds" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jessadfadfa On: December 30, 2005 10:20 PST
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Wheres that next chapter hmmm? IM GOING CRAZY WAITING FOR IT!!! heheh so pls update soon!
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 20:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fanfic i ever read! i dieing to know what happens next PLEASE UPdate!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: August 06, 2005 15:29 PDT
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sweet... that was wonderfully done. I love what you've done with this story and that was just an awesome chapter great job
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Reviewed By: Ember (not signed in) On: August 04, 2005 06:37 PDT
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Oh my sweet goodness. Words fail me Tempset. Absolutely breath-taking!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 10:50 PDT
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WAAAAAAAAAH! Sorry, can't be more articulate. That was great, gross, exciting, angst-ridden, and pure Tempest. I love that bad bad man. Go Vegeta. Man, I wish he would've eaten the lizard's head right there. Maybe Bulma wouldn't have found it the ultimate turn on, though... o.O
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 12:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, the last sentence was freaking PERFECT. You are a genius alone for that last line. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: August 01, 2005 12:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated! The chapter was very interesting! You always do awonderful job writing. That's goog Bulma is still alive watching her Vegeta getting ready to fight.
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 20:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just as good as ever, I find it better that you take awhile to post. It just adds to the suspense. The stories awesome, keep at it.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: July 14, 2005 20:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. i was freaking out when I read what happened to Vegeta...what happened to him is irrepairable, like losing his hair, correct? You said that he had his tail cut off and seared, so no more tail...OMG...he's not Vegeta anymore! He doesn't even have his precious hair! And poor Bulma...I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 09:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter. u seem to always keep my attention and i'm luvin u for it :)
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Reviewed By: TT On: July 07, 2005 09:22 PDT
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This is sad. hope vegeta will finally learn to treasure himself.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 06, 2005 16:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the Gods were involved, interesting. I hope Vegeta will save Bulma so that she'll be Queen instead of slave. I hope Goku realizes what he's doing. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 00:36 PDT
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very good chapter. I wonder how long it will take for them to get out of there. nice to see you updating
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 16:55 PDT
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ARGH! You tell her, Vegeta! Wow, those are some marital woes. I don't feel quite so grumpy at my own hubby now. I almost cried at the scene with Trunks but then you had to slam me with this piteous Vegeta and I got pretty depressed. I don't know how you are going to pull these guys out. I have no clue. I'm just glad that the power stayed on long enough this weekend for me to catch up on this story. I can't believe it's going to end soon--it seems like Vegeta's still got such a long way to go, the messed up guy!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 30, 2005 10:25 PDT
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yay!! great chapter and nice interaction between bv. They have a lot of issues to work through...
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