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Reviewed By: Mely On: June 29, 2005 17:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy to see that you're updating. There really hasn't been any great fics to read.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: June 29, 2005 04:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. I really liked this one! I was wondering about the guard standing outside his door...I was like WTF BULMA! You can't just sit there and scream like that! DUMMY! Lol, great chapter, again. I love how fast you updated! Do it again!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD I thought u were ubducted or something. Hope alls well. Luv ur story, keep up the wonderful work. :)
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 16:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I haven't read this story for so long that I hardly even remember it! I skimmed through the last chapter, remembered 17 and Bulma talking about Trunks in a cage, and that was it. I almost freaked out when I read that Vegeta had been defeated and was now a slave! What the heck did I miss? Jeez, I'm going to have to go back and read it all over again!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 10:51 PDT
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Delia and Raditz! Delia and Raditz! *skips around* Ohhh, that was enjoyable. I've missed you. I'll still be here, though, when you emerge from parenting challenges (in oh, about 18 years :-D JK!) Wish I could say something more intelligent but I'm just happy to have read this, and for Raditz month *sniff* I'm so fond of that furball! later...
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 10:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much too say other than a great sequeal and I dont mind waiting for your stories, there well worth the wait. You have other responsibilties in life and its okay too take awhile. Your kids need you more then we do. (V)ajin_Broly
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 21, 2005 23:02 PDT
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jumps up and down... omg you updated... yay... that was an awesome R/oc I love delia and though her character has flaws she's a great character. great new chapter. you did an awesome job and it was just what I needed after such a bad day... thanks
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Title: Whoa.
Reviewed By: bura400 (not signed in) On: May 18, 2005 16:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely intense and highly erotic. This a great piece of erotic/action adventure fanfiction. Too amazing for words. Welcome to my favorite authors list. Bura
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Reviewed By: VegetasLindalou On: May 06, 2005 12:33 PDT
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Great story, when are you going to update? Keep the goods a coming. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: amora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 22:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I appsolutly love your stories and wish you could e-mail us when the next chapter is up cause i'm so hooked on to your writings.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 09:36 PST
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Ack, got distracted and forgot to review. It took me two sittings to read this--unusual for me since I usually gobble up your chapters--but right when I thought Raditz and Nappa were dead I got hormonal depression and started to cry! This story is getting so g-ddamn good and the fight was awesome--KAKKAROT KICKED VEGETA'S ASS!!! Well, it was about time for Mr. Wickedness to be knocked down. Nappa was dispensible (although I was so happy when the gang of 3 was back together again, lol!) but a live Raditz makes me happy in your fics. I'm very much looking forward the future angst. Your description of Vegeta on post-purge worlds was chilling. Good characterization of King Cold too. I liked the whole tone of the thing--dark and swirly and defeating.
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Reviewed By: al On: November 09, 2004 16:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you cant just leave it there! holy crap!!and damn it all, goku beat vegeta again!!! nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! (all dramatic like)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729(not signed in) On: November 09, 2004 10:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really nice chapter. I always look forward to updates from you.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 09:51 PDT
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Holy moly, King Cold has Trunks! You manage to creep me out in every chapter (I'm not too easily creepified, either!) Saffron rocked--from the oreo cookie description you gave of her to every wonderfully controlled word in her dialogue with Bulma. I appreciate your self-determining female characters. I've had enough of wimpy Bulma stories, and although your Delia started off wounded and vulnerable, she's reclaimed her girl power beautifully! I'm actually as interested in her romance w/ Rad as much as I am in the B/V. Oh and the blue catsuit on Bulma was a perfect touch... Some mornings I wake up and find terribly entertaining fanfic notifications in my mail and think "yes, life is good..."
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Reviewed By: stars of the heavens On: October 08, 2004 14:36 PDT
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Hey! It's starbrella...i just didn't sign in. Great chapter!!! I could have sworn that you reposted this chapter up or somthing b/c i could have sworn that i read this part b4....o well. Great job on it anyways!!!! Update soon!
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