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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: October 08, 2004 08:08 PDT
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I don't know how you've done it, but this sequel is capturing my interest just like the first. It doesn't seem "taped on" at all. An insane Vegeta is always a delight and some lines just thrill me. "What do you want, worm?"--isn't it great to have a character be able to say that and mean it? The POVs here worked great--Raditz (heart eyes) and Sam are just great? Can I type the word "great" one more time! That makes 3 times. Here comes 4: What's great about having LisaB as a beta is that she reads so closely and is so honest and smart. Sometimes I think if I sent my stories to no one else but her, I've been fulfilled audience-wise (heh--but that doesn't last too long!) Thanks for this story and the others--you're really not helping me get over Vegeta at ALL, you know.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 14:41 PDT
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Well, all hell's broke loose, hasn't it? Poor Vegeta, I don't know how you're going to pull him back from the abyss he's wallowing in. Excellent sequel so far. I'm enjoying it immensely.
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Reviewed By: starslight On: September 12, 2004 17:05 PDT
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Wow, another great chapter for you. I can't see that Bulma and Vegeta are getting a bit distant. I wonder when she's going to find Trunks, i hope it's soon. Oh, in case you don't know, it's starbrella from the other review.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: September 11, 2004 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo la la finally bulma and delia get dirty haha...great job update soon!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 18:59 PDT
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Delia! You go girl! Woot! You weren't kidding about the girl power. I enjoyed this chapter immensely! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:43 PDT
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WOW< even though i don't review on every chapter doesn't mean that i don't read it. I;ve spent the total of 5+ hrs finishing your story...The whole things was awesome!! I love it! I hope you update soon~
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Reviewed By: nona On: September 05, 2004 23:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved how you devoted a chunk of this chapter to explaining Vegeta's shame and struggle! Yes... some girl power would be good next chappy. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 19:05 PDT
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oh my, Veg is so cracked, isn't he? I don't know where this insanity is taking him, but knowing you, it's going to be a swell ride! I love the dark prince and I'm glad you didn't have him pulled entirely together for this sequel. Well, he's all unknotted, unraveled, and spun out of control so the only thing left for him to do is stop reacting, right? What's Bulma going to do??? eeeeeek! The suspense is marvelous!
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Reviewed By: Kethry(not loged in) On: September 05, 2004 11:37 PDT
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**Does a happy dance** A new Chappie!! woohoo. Ok ok V is losing it. **hugs him and ducks to get missed by the blast** Keep it up^.^ Thanks for updating.
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Title: at odds
Reviewed By: carinne On: September 03, 2004 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic wait impatiently for the next chapter ccfleursdelys
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Reviewed By: VegetasLindalou On: August 26, 2004 13:56 PDT
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Great story. read against all odds, it was great too. please hurry and update more. You have such feeling in the story line. Thanks
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Reviewed By: joy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 12:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your other fic 'against all odds, but this one is at least as good as that one. I've been reading this already somewhere else,but read it here also anyway. keep it going
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 08:03 PDT
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Alright.. I am additcied to your writing. have been since I found them on the GR... but but but but.. this one is not as updated here as on the GR!!!!! **Whines*** I was going to get ahead of the game by reading them here and not waiting for the GR updates!! **crys and kiacks feet like a kid** ok I feel better now.. but really... I am in love with your fic.s you make the charaters live and breath.... you paint the picture to the point I can close my eyes and see them. Please never lose your drive to write and ... get this one up to date please!! I want her to find trunks... and well find out what happens after a certain someone goes balsitk.... not going to say anything more I am sure you know what I mean. Wind to your Wings and keep writing!!!
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 00:07 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is becoming even better! It's nice to see some new issues arising between them. I can completely imagine Vegeta's obsession, especially after what happened on Namek. I wonder how Bulma is going to continue to deal with this and also what she will do to get her son back. The lemon was excellent. By far, one of the best I've ever read. Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: StaindGT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love your stuff. I've read everything you've written and i honesty think you got talent. Please continue with this story. I've been needing to know the ending of AT ODDS since you first had it out. Lith.
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