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| "Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past (On hold)" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 ] | Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields On: August 03, 2004 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! Kikyo, you rock in this fic!
| Title: wow that was just amazing!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (not loged in yet) On: July 28, 2004 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great Keep up the good work!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god...are there not other reviews? It is just...absolutely...unbelievable how original this story is. It's like I'm at a lose here. As cheesey as that is, it's true. I mean, I can seriously picture this storyline being slapped on the desk of whoever writes the Inuyasha shows over in Japan. I just want to say that I am blown away with your creativity. Not to mention you're a talented writer in general. Personally, I don't think any of the characters were OOC. I mean you make them believable because we all know Inuyasha has a soft side somewhere...and you gave him 4 years to mature so it really all makes sense. And DAMN! I was just SO impressed with your version of Naraku's defeat. *two thumbs up* And this new enemy is just brilliant. I happen to be highly addicted to the pure good force vs. the ultimate evil force type stuff. Oh, and your hinted lemons are very very hot. I loved that little chase through the woods. ^_^ I think what makes these sorts of lemons more hot than those of other stories is that whole scent thing. lol, but that's just freaky little me. I have one tiny complaint though and that's your use of the run on sentence thing. I just find myself getting distracted when the sentences go on to a great length. But hey, if that's simply your style I can understand. Just a suggestion. Damn...I run out of characters but it still lets me type. I dunno how this works but I wanna be safe and make sure you get this review. UPDATE SOON!!! -the Lone Vixen
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