| "Roommates" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 14:22 CDT
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Update soon.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 07:38 CDT
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another great chapter=D only thing i noticed was a few spellin mistakes n mixed up tenses but who doesnt do that lol also...(idk if ive mentioned this before) the dialogue is kinda hard to read when bunched in a paragraph but i'm still able to follow it pretty well. great story =D
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Reviewed By: Aphae On: August 14, 2004 23:34 CDT
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I am completely addicted to this fic. Please update as steadly as humanly possible.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Fanfic is really good! Please update soon! I put you on my favorites list, too!
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Reviewed By: Kiki and Kath On: August 14, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kiki = VERY nice! I loved it! Keep updating! And FAST! I liked the fact that she had been orginally registered as a boy so there was nothing they could do about it and they were stuck together ^_^ my my what naughtyness could unfold? heheh...that aside its still very good and I've told one other author on this site that its very hard to REALLY capture my interest and both of you have done that...I also like how you put in Ayame and Kouga insinuating that the two of them getting together later would be...difficult. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!! Kath = uh...ditto O_O
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo that kisss wasssss soooooooooo cyuuuuut
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 17:59 CDT
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Woohooo! Inu and Kikyo are done...well, at least on his end and he can't moon after an idealized version of her. After all, he caught he doing the deed! Now it's time for Inu-Kag to get down to it!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 17:29 CDT
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O.O they finally figured out .... YAY !!!! lol update soon !!! Haha im so glad he dumped Kikyo lol
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Title: Not lame it ruled!
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the ending. They are fianlly realizing their feelings for each other. For other lemons I was hoping to know what Sessy/Rin were doing after Sessy gave her the rings. I was looking forward to that a little. If you could maybe you could flashback to that at a later time in the fic. Awasome story though. I loved the scene where Kag was pressed up againest the Inu. Looking forward to some Kouga trying to get Kag and the Inu getting jealous in the future...
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Title: Awww!
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha made a picture of Kagome. I really liked the demon ravishing the deaad angel picture I would love to that pic in real life. Are you going to show us the picture or is there a link to it? All I have to have to say to you is you are an extremly good author and you should write for a living if you do original stories. I really love this fic. Please keep on writing! See Ya! ^_~ Mic Mic
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Title: It's about time!!!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about time!!! Anyway GREAT CHAPTER 5! I hope Chapter Six will be here soon! Can't wait! Oh and thankx fpr making Kikyo a WHORE! She is bitch none the less! Well I'll shut up now! Ja`ne!
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: August 12, 2004 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! that was soooo great!!! i love seeing kagome and inuyasha go at it! they hae so much fire and passion together. i kinda really hope sango's part in this matchmaking thing wont be too intricate though, i think it would be awesome if they got together more of their own realization. this story i soooooo amazing though. lol i was suprised miroku and sango got together so fast but it was really cute. great chapters! pleeeease update soon, i can't WAIT to read the next one, its also great how you have yur chapters long too. update lol ; )
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Reviewed By: SquirrelzOfTheDamned [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sotry is excellent and I hope you update soon! And yes, I do have this on my favorite's list! :)
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Reviewed By: jc On: August 10, 2004 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great plot and i liked how everything was intwined, hope u bring *Shippou* back from the hospital! Improvements...umm...more updates and longer chappies? keep it up :)
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO THIS IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER
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