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Reviewed By: yourbaba On: October 22, 2004 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job! This is really well written. I didn't expect it to be when I started reading, it but I'm very impressed. You've got a lot of talent! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, so don't you go and get sick again. ;p I also think that this is getting really exciting with the whole Kikyo thing. Well, keep up the great work. Take your time, I know the next chapter will be awesome!
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Reviewed By: summercutie2005 On: October 19, 2004 21:57 CDT
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i love this fanfic just keep posting.
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: October 19, 2004 10:52 CDT
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I'm reading again, and still enjoying the story. ^_^ Sorry to hear that someone tried to steal it. I've had that happen before with one of my own stories. I'd had it posted of ff.net for almost two years, and despite it being a popular story, no one tried to mess with it until recently. Rude people...anyway, I also got to the part where you explained that English in not your first language. It does explain why some of your words are used out of context. But overall, for someone who is writing in a second language, you do very, very well! As I said, it wouldn't take much work to clean it up. Anyway, I'll continue to read and I hope you update soon! I must see more of Inuyasha and Kagome! ^_~
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Title: Wow....!
Reviewed By: BlackInuAnimeMangaFreakNaughtyBitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...! I just love this story! I mean how you're working out Inu and Kag's realtionship! I am so glad you're feeling better! ^-^v. I can't wait for the next chap! Wow...I didn't think ya were married...you sounded like....16 or somethin ^-^. Though if ya got married at an early age I think that's cool..^-^. Anyways lover your story and keep up the great work! Peace and Love!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon (not signed in) On: October 18, 2004 16:59 CDT
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I've been reading your story and have gotten about halfway through so far. I really like the plot, and you write well. ^_^ Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is very interesting, and I like the fact that Sango and Miroku actually seemed to have gotten together easily despite his perverted nature. Normally they go through hell before they get that far, LOL...so seeing something different is good. One thing I do have to mention though is have you ever thought of getting a beta reader? You write well, and the basis of your writing is well thought out and well written. But you have a lot of technical problems that can throw a reader off. You have a problem with using too many commas, and you tend to use wrong words in a lot of places. Like, two words that sound alike, but are used in two totally different contexts. Like 'fuzzy' and fussy' were confused. Things like that. Some writers are so bad that no amount of beta editing could help their work, but because you writing is really good beyond the technical aspect, with some polishing, you could have a very good piece of writing all around. ^_^
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 14:46 CDT
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Please Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:21 CDT
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awsome addition to your story. its wonderful. yes, now we have our smut. LOL. you did a great job writting and brining us to this point in the story. great job again. i hope you continue to write more and i'm glad your feeling better :-)
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sits in her chair eatign captain crunch because aroudn chapter 5 she got a HUGE urge to eat it* Wow! Beautiful story I really love it. Your an amazing writter, and I love both the story line, and the way you portray the characters.
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Reviewed By: AndreahTreole [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I'm reading this, but its good! (and I'm not just talking about the smut *hint Hint*) Anyway I love it so far, I can't wait for you to write more ^^ please continue! Crim: And, as a dragon for this pesky human- AnTr: *glare* Crim: *raise of eyebrow* right, anyway since I am a dragon for this... thing... for lack of better words, I must insist you update quickly... AnTr: *growl* Crim: You don't scare me ya know? AnTr: I live for false hope...
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 22:49 CDT
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yay! that was awesome. kinda odd though how all of a sudden rin and her family up and left. some things were a bit confusing. but it's mostly good. i love this story. it's so...cool! i so want a male roommate when i finally go to a 4 year college and live in a dorm. i can't stand girls. lol. men are easier to deal with...usually. great job! can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: INCREDIBLE!!
Reviewed By: Jacob Lacey On: October 17, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an incredible story I read from you!! I think Kikyou deserves to die!!! (yes, I'm a Kikyou hater... sue me). I love your writing style!! I wish I could write like that (I write books too), but sadly, I suck. :P anyway, very good! I hope to see new chapters soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: naughty angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 17:11 CDT
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So happy that you finally updated. Please continue. I love this story.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 17, 2004 16:34 CDT
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kikyo ugh just died (again) bitch! c how worked up uve got me? jeez...great story!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 17, 2004 16:13 CDT
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hehe making out in the garage...good chapter
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Title: *whew*!!!
Reviewed By: Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I had been waiting to see how well your inu/kag lemon would turn out...and I have to say...that it was pretty damn good! Glad to know you're feeling better...hope you update soon!! Take care & much love!! =^-.~^=
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