| "Roommates" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 09:39 CDT
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oOoOo i like it! i like your writing as well. there were very few if any mistakes. great chapter. =D
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Reviewed By: Inu Luver On: July 29, 2004 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITING I'M DYING TO READ MORE IT REALLY GOOD AND I LIKE THE LITTLE CLIFF HANGERS U LEAVE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Reviewed By: InuYoukaiGal1450 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! That was TOTALLY AWESOME. Personally, I feel Kikyou shoul run into an accident at the Shrine, but it's your fic! U do what u want! You've REALLY gotta update! I have a feeling that the party is going to be an EXCELLENT chapter!
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Reviewed By: angl4u2luv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 22:31 CDT
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UPDATE SOON The story is good so far and put Koga in the next chapter plez I just love reading FanFics when he is trying to get w/ Kagome
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! keep up the good work! please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe.. good chapter, i loved the ending... keep it up and don't worry about updating on regular basis... i don't update on regular basis, it's hard to update fast... you have read my stories and seen the style i write, it's not easy to write that in a day, it takes a lot out of me... sorry about that, i didn't mean to talk about my problems... anyway, good story, has potential to be a very good high school fic, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..this is a really great fanfic...the last chapter was a really good cliffhanger kind of thingy...well..hope to see more chapters up later...keep up the good work...
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 17:29 CDT
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Its good update soon !! I wanna find out what happens and if shes going to stay with Inuyasha or not ! Please let her stay with him !
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Title: Ohoh
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good! Please continue! I liked it! post soon!
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Reviewed By: EvilAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:53 CDT
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please update soon. its just gettin good.
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Reviewed By: KoolNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fan fic!! Please right more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome needs to stay with InuYasha and she should find out that hes a half demon too lol so she could tweak his cute little doggy ears !! Oh i love those ears !! *giggles* haha update soon !! Oh and Kikyo is a bitch and he should break up with her lol
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Title: Awasome fic!!!!
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! You have to update fast and soon. It is the perfect AU and the only thing I didn't like was Kikyo as the Inu's girlfriend she needs to die! Other than the evil that is Kikyo the story was awasome. So far all they have is physical attraction but your story is opening great. I can't wait for Kouga to come into things. Please don't make him a loser though make Kagome like him a little and then have him try to do something to her with Inu to the rescue!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: July 26, 2004 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really liked the chapter and i can't wait until you update!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, remember me? I was surprised to find you here... especially with a cool new story like this, very good start, i'll read more if you post more! Oh yes, i have three of my own stories here too: 1. Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past 2. Loneliness of the Free Wind (The story i'm proud of) 3. Silver Winds of Passion. I was thinking that if you have the time and the need to read good drama, check out Loneliness of the Free wind, it's in the one-shot department. Well, update soon!
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