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Reviewed By: Meguz On: January 24, 2005 00:28 CST
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ust wonderig when/if you were going ot update again. love the story cant wait for more
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Title: INCREDIBLE
Reviewed By: lighting-hellcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're story is absoultly incredible!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!! UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!! Lighting-hellcat
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Title: SOOOOO GOOOOOD
Reviewed By: Milady Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my lord, I love this... It's so good... And with the love scene between Inu & Kag, just perfect (dreamy eyed)... More romance with those two... But Kikyo can just die because I hate thet bitch... And I read that your from sweden, so am I or I live in sweden... But I though that was cool... But update soon this amazing story...
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 04, 2004 19:56 CST
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regular updating...? it's been a little over a month :(
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Reviewed By: demonchild_13 On: November 19, 2004 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please,keep going .its just getting started.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: November 09, 2004 21:02 CST
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wow, now that's a threatening review. please update soon! i can't wait to read what happens next!
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Title: GAH!
Reviewed By: *she_devil (offline) On: November 05, 2004 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE OR DIE!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 17:39 CDT
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Update PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: yourbaba On: October 22, 2004 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job! This is really well written. I didn't expect it to be when I started reading, it but I'm very impressed. You've got a lot of talent! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, so don't you go and get sick again. ;p I also think that this is getting really exciting with the whole Kikyo thing. Well, keep up the great work. Take your time, I know the next chapter will be awesome!
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Reviewed By: summercutie2005 On: October 19, 2004 21:57 CDT
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i love this fanfic just keep posting.
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: October 19, 2004 10:52 CDT
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I'm reading again, and still enjoying the story. ^_^ Sorry to hear that someone tried to steal it. I've had that happen before with one of my own stories. I'd had it posted of ff.net for almost two years, and despite it being a popular story, no one tried to mess with it until recently. Rude people...anyway, I also got to the part where you explained that English in not your first language. It does explain why some of your words are used out of context. But overall, for someone who is writing in a second language, you do very, very well! As I said, it wouldn't take much work to clean it up. Anyway, I'll continue to read and I hope you update soon! I must see more of Inuyasha and Kagome! ^_~
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Title: Wow....!
Reviewed By: BlackInuAnimeMangaFreakNaughtyBitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...! I just love this story! I mean how you're working out Inu and Kag's realtionship! I am so glad you're feeling better! ^-^v. I can't wait for the next chap! Wow...I didn't think ya were married...you sounded like....16 or somethin ^-^. Though if ya got married at an early age I think that's cool..^-^. Anyways lover your story and keep up the great work! Peace and Love!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon (not signed in) On: October 18, 2004 16:59 CDT
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I've been reading your story and have gotten about halfway through so far. I really like the plot, and you write well. ^_^ Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is very interesting, and I like the fact that Sango and Miroku actually seemed to have gotten together easily despite his perverted nature. Normally they go through hell before they get that far, LOL...so seeing something different is good. One thing I do have to mention though is have you ever thought of getting a beta reader? You write well, and the basis of your writing is well thought out and well written. But you have a lot of technical problems that can throw a reader off. You have a problem with using too many commas, and you tend to use wrong words in a lot of places. Like, two words that sound alike, but are used in two totally different contexts. Like 'fuzzy' and fussy' were confused. Things like that. Some writers are so bad that no amount of beta editing could help their work, but because you writing is really good beyond the technical aspect, with some polishing, you could have a very good piece of writing all around. ^_^
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:21 CDT
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awsome addition to your story. its wonderful. yes, now we have our smut. LOL. you did a great job writting and brining us to this point in the story. great job again. i hope you continue to write more and i'm glad your feeling better :-)
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