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Reviewed By: Dragonsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story and a shippo and sherry one would be cool as well i would love to see that and how it would end up as.
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your story!!! i cant wait until the stooges see inuyasha in action with his swordXD please update soon!! but i was just wondering...are you going to continue on with the story or have you given up? i really hope you havent...its soooooo good!!! sorry to be a botherXD i tend to get a little caught up in fanficsXD lol=D please update soon=D
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 00:22 CDT
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I really love this story. I know it's been a couple of years since you last updated it, but if you ever get around to finishing it, I'll be there to read it. Just one thing i have to complain about, the formating on your last two chapters is really bad, so bad in fact that I got a headache trying to read it here, and had to check it out on fanfiction. I don't really want to gripe about things like that, because i know authors have lives outside of writting these things and that sometimes formating just goes wrong through no fault of your own, but in this case it really is pretty awlful.
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Reviewed By: inugurl93 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey Jess! i love your story! can't wait to read the sequel you're writing! see you at Asheville High! --Kaja
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was great! I think A spin off with Shippo and Sherry would be hilarious.
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Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally fell in love with this fanfic! I really enjoy the fact that you don't use the cliche "Naraku is the evil guy" plot. I can't remember if you mentioned it but is Rin going to come into the story and will she be paired with Sesshy-kun? If so, that would be so awesome!! Did Kagura and Kanna get a chance of a normal life? Where's Myouga? I love the idea of a Sherry/Shippou relationship! Sherry's so awesome! As for Anime shows, Naruto, Fullmetal Alchemist, Zatch Bell, Yu-Gi-Oh! G/X, Eureka 7, Samurai 7 and Samurai Champloo are awesome! Naruto comes on Cartoon Network Monday-Thursday at 8:00PM and Saturday at 7:30PM and 8:00PM. Fullmetal Alchemist comes on Cartoon Network Mondays at 11:30PM and Saturday at 10:30 PM and 1:30AM. Zatch Bell comes on Cartoon Network Monday-Friday at 3:30PM, Friday at 11:00PM and Saturday at 7:00PM. Yu-Gi-Oh! G/X comes on Cartoon Network Saturday at 5:30 PM. Eureka 7 comes on Cartoon Network on Saturday at 11:00PM and 2:00AM. Samurai 7 comes on IFC Saturdays at 3:00 PM, 9:30 PM and 12:30 AM. Samurai Champloo comes Cartoon Network on Saturday night at 12:00AM and 3:00AM. By the way, these are all Central time. Hope these will help ya! I really enjoy your story and await your next chapter! ^_~ Oh, yeah...do you know any good Youkai Inuyasha fanfics? Oh, did you know that Inuyasha's parents' real names are Toga and Izayoi? If so, was the reason you named them Hiroshi and Izumi the same as Inuyasha being Yue? Just curious. Ja matta!
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the beginning is so freaking funny I can't wait to try it out. and how many stooges to change a light bulb very funny. is sesshomaru going to come back? plz you have to update must know what happens. need to know what happens nexts. ladytokyo
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Reviewed By: YashLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 01:37 CDT
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there you go ^^ hold u update with a new chater soon ^^ i cant wait :)
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Title: umm
Reviewed By: YashLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 22:34 CDT
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im confused 23 and 24 r the same chapters o.O?.....anyway i love this story keep updating ^^
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Title: About Time
Reviewed By: Majicman55 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't expect me to have any sympathy for you after you tortured me by making me wait so long for an update. Okay, I'm kidding. Just please don't let it be as long till your next update.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:42 CDT
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Whaa-hooooo! You updated! Yay! I love you penguine! I'm very sorry to hear about all of your troubles, and I hope that things have been getting better. please update again soon, I can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to update? I LOVE this story you just have to! i'd love a shippo/sherry apiring, you could even tie that into the epilogue of this one, if you're making an epilogue! even so, i still LOVE this story! you're an awesome author, UPDATE! please??
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Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I can't wait till your next update.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 18:30 CST
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*scratches back of head* *sighs* *shakes head.* And you were doing so well... I hope you update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens now. When's Sesshy gonna show? that is what I wanna know!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 10:26 CST
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I wholeheartedly agree with the Shippou/Sherry thing. They are so much alike. AS for the second half, I can't think of anything right off the bat, other than finding out what Sessho-kun wants to know, and seeing Inu's parents show up.
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 13:53 CST
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you want the cherry cordials...finish the fic pretty please!!!
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Title: *BLUSHES*
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 15:24 CST
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And one other thing ... ah ... well, I was reading all the previous reviews and I wanted to apologise for one of the ones I sent. SO, I'M REALLY SORRY!!! And as you can see I never did take this off my favorites, so can you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE forgive me?
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 15:06 CST
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You know, I just thought of another thing. Sherry doesn't remind me of Shiori at all, Shiori was very quiet and almost timid. Who she does remind me of, personality wise, is Rin. Sessho's little girl, who was so chattery and vivacious. So maybe you could do something with that angle when Yasha-kun wakes up. After all, Sherry's another little girl with no real home to go to. Her Uncle notwithstanding, since he's never there. Anyway, this was just a thought that occured to me when I was reading chapter 10.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 14:03 CST
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Hmm, in chapter five you say sherry's hair is brown, but you change it later to red. Are you going to fix that? I'm just rereading this so no worries. Waiting for an update. Which I hope comes soon, or I may die of asphyxiation.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is great i cant wait until he wakes up and i hope it is soon cant wait until u have ur next chapter up! its really good!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 16:54 CST
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I have finally cought up! Yay for me! Ahem, anyway, I cannot wait for chapter 22. I wonder if the eclipse will to anything...? Ah well, I guess I will have to wait and find out!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 11:22 CST
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Sessho should really be there. Granted, they never got along well, but they are still brothers. And after all, he already showed up once. Who's to say he hasn't been keeping an eye on the situation from the beginning? Hell, given what a perfectionist he is, I wouldn't put it past him to have looked in on Inuyasha since the day he was reborn. Via Shippo, that is. Shippo already mentioned that he had been in contact with Sesshomaru. Just don't hook him up with Kagura. Bleegh! That's a disturbing thought. And Kouga ... well, not my favorite guy, but he's not bad, just have him bring Ayame with him. Someone needs to keep him in line, with Inuyasha down. Maybe the two tag-a-longs too. I'm sure Ginta and Hakkaku would love to see Kagome-neesan! And I think Dave would get along famously with Sessho-kun. Sesshomaru may be closed-off, but so is dave, although Dave is much more the protective big brother type. With a little bit of practice on Dave's part, they'd be mirror images, personality wise. Heh, that's all I can think of right now Penguine! Hope it gives you some ideas. TY for updating!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 21:58 CST
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Oh my, it seems that I have not reviewed for quite some time. It also seems that my tone has changed, too, since my first review of your story. I stumbled upon this story a while ago and started to read. Now, I suddenly remember reading this story even though it has been so long. Anyway, I am trying to catch up with your new chapters and it seems I have only reached chapter 8! I will try harder to catch up! -Tsuki
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want more...pretty please with sugar and a rocky mountain chocolate factory cherry cordial on top...(hey i work there now...you give me more i send you a half-pound)...please send Koga and let Inuyasha whop his ass please...it would serve him right for all the Kogame is "My Woman" BS...update as soon as you can
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 19:38 CDT
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MORE
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Title: YES!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M STILL LOVIN' IT!
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Title: OH BOY!!!
Reviewed By: caliko not signed in On: September 26, 2005 20:55 CDT
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YAY!!! if you decide to do an email list, mine is carolinakitty@gmail.com !!! Anywho, I can't believe that it took me so long to check up on this story! And FLUFFY-SAMA made an appearance! God, what I wouldn't do to actually 'hear' Yasha-Babe call him that to his face when he wakes up... lol anyway, awaiting the next chapter eagerly... ~Caliko
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Title: Thank you.
Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 14, 2005 23:34 CDT
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i was going to review earlier in the story, but i got to cought up in it. This is wonderfull. i almost passed it by but i'm glad i didn't. i have just one question for you though, when does shippo show up. i can't wait to see him in the story... thanks again and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 22:23 CDT
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More More!!!!1
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is excellent keep it up and i am willing to wait as i know how life can be...i got two kids and i am just starting writing...keep up the good work.
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