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| "Wake Me Up Inside" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: Inu_4_Eva On: December 12, 2004 13:49 CST
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BTW, I agree with lonewolfcries, I thought Dave was going to be like a Sesshomaru...but Sessh isn't so foul mouthed and he isn't relaed to Inuyasha....but it did seem like it...older that Inuyasha and they being alike...its like, he is half Sessh or something...I even thought Sherry was Rin at first but Shiori is an excellent decision...plus when I read that part thats the episode they were giving...freaky your ego must be so inflated by my complements, gomen! Update soon! Arigato!
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever (nli so call me Inu_4_eva if ya want!) On: December 12, 2004 13:42 CST
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Dude....that is sooo not fair...I just started reading this story yesterday and immediatllly got addicted. Off course it was 3:40 or something in the morning so I didn't finish in one day...Oh! Before I forget, when you put the part when Kag talks about Kikyo, it was 550 years ago, cause thats when she died......I got so disapointed when I was going to click for the next chapter, only to realize that was the last chapter....Sooo that means you must update! I am keeping this in my mind. Saved. Stored. Never gonna forget.
| Reviewed By: Lonewolfcries [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 08:32 CST
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Excellent Story so far. Looking forward to your next installment. One question, are we sure Yao/Inuyasha/Romeo doesn't recognize the "stooges" from before. 'Cause Dave reminds me alot of Sesshoumaru. Keep up your wonderful work, Merry Christmas, ~Lonewolf
tmas | Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 22:35 CST
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must voice the evilness of MM.org I mean when I try to review they log me out! anyways good chapter. Although Kagome needs to learn to make people wait! geez it was 24 hrs, less than that, before she was supposed to tell her story and she spills the beans! I keep on wanting to beg you to have Inu-Yasha wake up but I know that the wake up will be better if I wait. Also I can't decide if I want Inu-yasha to wake up with everyone there, only Kagome, no one, or without Kagome. Although I'm certain I don't like the last two. Can't wait to see if Kagome does a repeat of wed. and thu. :) ~Na
| Reviewed By: Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 15:48 CST
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UPDATE, UPDATE! I can't wait to read more of your story. And please - let him wake up soon... Regards, Luna
| Title: A fan!
Reviewed By: Enorema On: December 07, 2004 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN YOU"LL EVER KNOW!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON, OKAY?
| Reviewed By: fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:10 CST
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please update soon, ive read this fanfic twice since you updated and i really wanna know about both marks date with beth, and exactley what sherry says to kagome in the car!
| Reviewed By: Raina1 On: December 04, 2004 23:51 CST
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I waited until I had finished the entire story up to the point where you left off to review, as my par usual. I have to say this is amazing. I usually don't like these kinds of stories that take the characters out of the context of the show but you've managed to transcend that with this story. Each character is pitch-perfect and it's hard not to chuckle at the Beth/Mark antics - they definitely are Sango and Miroku! Your development of each character is realistic and everyone has so much depth it's incredible! As a writer myself, I expect a LOT from both original and even fanfiction. You've surpassed my expectations by a milestone and I hope you'll continue this story up until its end. I'm eager to see what other reincarnated characters will come into the fray next! Will Sesshomaru still be Inuyasha's brother even in this present time? While I was reading this story I got this funny image of them going to Yue's family's house and a little girl that looks exactly like Rin opens the door, takes one look at them and yells at the top of her lungs: "DADDY!" And guess who's her daddy...LOL. Just fooling. Keep writing -- I look forward to the next part! I also hope to see your name on the bestseller list someday!
| Reviewed By: Call Me Kim On: November 28, 2004 22:56 CST
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grrrrrrr!!! sry about that. I totally messed up on my name…
| Reviewed By: Call Me im On: November 28, 2004 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again! :) To answer your question, u can safely ride a mare after about a month. I hope that helped u!
| Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying the story so far, and I can understand why you are waiting to wake up Inuyasha. I'll be patient as long as the story stays good. (which I'm positive it will) keep up the great job! ^_^
| Reviewed By: lil_sis4556 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 11:17 CST
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update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update!!!!!! | Title: Yay~!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! That chapter Yet!!!!Sherry talked to Inuyasha!!!!!!!!!!or Yue........I STILL LUV UR STOREY PLEAAAAAASE CONTINUE!!!!!When is Inu gonna wake up!!!???i'm dieing here!!!Jeez Keito almost like Miroku!Pervert!lmao..
| Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 22:01 CST
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i really love your story! i was searching for a really good one to read for the longest and i stumbled across yours, but man i'm glad i did!! i can't wait to read the rest, please update soon! ^_~
| Reviewed By: bk On: November 24, 2004 14:46 CST
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Thanks for the new chapter. I think your story is incredible. I wish you would update more often but I know some things in life come first. Well you know the saying "some things are worth waiting for." I appreciate your chapters whenever you can get around to them; the thing that bothers me is how some people who get you interested and then drop off the face of the earth. I know you won't do that you seem dedicated to your fanfic. Take your time and have a Happy Thanksgiving.
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