| "Wake Me Up Inside" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 13:53 CST
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you want the cherry cordials...finish the fic pretty please!!!
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Title: *BLUSHES*
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 15:24 CST
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And one other thing ... ah ... well, I was reading all the previous reviews and I wanted to apologise for one of the ones I sent. SO, I'M REALLY SORRY!!! And as you can see I never did take this off my favorites, so can you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE forgive me?
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 15:06 CST
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You know, I just thought of another thing. Sherry doesn't remind me of Shiori at all, Shiori was very quiet and almost timid. Who she does remind me of, personality wise, is Rin. Sessho's little girl, who was so chattery and vivacious. So maybe you could do something with that angle when Yasha-kun wakes up. After all, Sherry's another little girl with no real home to go to. Her Uncle notwithstanding, since he's never there. Anyway, this was just a thought that occured to me when I was reading chapter 10.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 14:03 CST
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Hmm, in chapter five you say sherry's hair is brown, but you change it later to red. Are you going to fix that? I'm just rereading this so no worries. Waiting for an update. Which I hope comes soon, or I may die of asphyxiation.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is great i cant wait until he wakes up and i hope it is soon cant wait until u have ur next chapter up! its really good!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 16:54 CST
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I have finally cought up! Yay for me! Ahem, anyway, I cannot wait for chapter 22. I wonder if the eclipse will to anything...? Ah well, I guess I will have to wait and find out!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 11:22 CST
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Sessho should really be there. Granted, they never got along well, but they are still brothers. And after all, he already showed up once. Who's to say he hasn't been keeping an eye on the situation from the beginning? Hell, given what a perfectionist he is, I wouldn't put it past him to have looked in on Inuyasha since the day he was reborn. Via Shippo, that is. Shippo already mentioned that he had been in contact with Sesshomaru. Just don't hook him up with Kagura. Bleegh! That's a disturbing thought. And Kouga ... well, not my favorite guy, but he's not bad, just have him bring Ayame with him. Someone needs to keep him in line, with Inuyasha down. Maybe the two tag-a-longs too. I'm sure Ginta and Hakkaku would love to see Kagome-neesan! And I think Dave would get along famously with Sessho-kun. Sesshomaru may be closed-off, but so is dave, although Dave is much more the protective big brother type. With a little bit of practice on Dave's part, they'd be mirror images, personality wise. Heh, that's all I can think of right now Penguine! Hope it gives you some ideas. TY for updating!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 21:58 CST
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Oh my, it seems that I have not reviewed for quite some time. It also seems that my tone has changed, too, since my first review of your story. I stumbled upon this story a while ago and started to read. Now, I suddenly remember reading this story even though it has been so long. Anyway, I am trying to catch up with your new chapters and it seems I have only reached chapter 8! I will try harder to catch up! -Tsuki
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want more...pretty please with sugar and a rocky mountain chocolate factory cherry cordial on top...(hey i work there now...you give me more i send you a half-pound)...please send Koga and let Inuyasha whop his ass please...it would serve him right for all the Kogame is "My Woman" BS...update as soon as you can
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 19:38 CDT
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MORE
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Title: YES!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M STILL LOVIN' IT!
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Title: OH BOY!!!
Reviewed By: caliko not signed in On: September 26, 2005 20:55 CDT
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YAY!!! if you decide to do an email list, mine is carolinakitty@gmail.com !!! Anywho, I can't believe that it took me so long to check up on this story! And FLUFFY-SAMA made an appearance! God, what I wouldn't do to actually 'hear' Yasha-Babe call him that to his face when he wakes up... lol anyway, awaiting the next chapter eagerly... ~Caliko
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Title: Thank you.
Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 14, 2005 23:34 CDT
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i was going to review earlier in the story, but i got to cought up in it. This is wonderfull. i almost passed it by but i'm glad i didn't. i have just one question for you though, when does shippo show up. i can't wait to see him in the story... thanks again and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 22:23 CDT
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More More!!!!1
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is excellent keep it up and i am willing to wait as i know how life can be...i got two kids and i am just starting writing...keep up the good work.
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