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Title: In Total Awe
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, very well written. It brings out more of a sensitive side of Inuyasha, and like Ice said, I can't believe she sat him. That was her only reaction..lol funneh. Bring on the juicy parts soon, i've been sooooo patient and been faithful to this fiction for a VERY long time! I really enjoy your fan fiction, please update soon. I'm also not very hyper tonight...(that was very random)haha.
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Reviewed By: ice_apparition17 On: July 10, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow these chapters were well worth the wait, seriously. I love the three Stooges they crack me up, Keito is the best. And Sherry is the cutest. Oh! and as for the Whizzbang, I say go for it!!! Sounds like fun! LOL, anywho I can't wait for the next chapter, I can't believe Kagome "sat" Inuyasha at the end of this one, that one caught me by surprise, but I bet he's shocked as well. Please update very very soon!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: July 06, 2005 17:17 CDT
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amazing story you have going here! the OOW would be a great idea, it could be a livejournal community... or an ez-board thing or something... when i first started reading the story, i thought 2 things: 1. Shelly was rin, and 2. Dave was Sesshoumaru, with that whole calm, tough guy stuff, i was sure, but then i read the auther's note ^^ i can't wait to hear from you again!
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness. I don't want another Kikyo running around. I thought that was what it was but I was freaking out when she was acting like that. I loved both updated chapters. It was certianly well worth the wait. Also to the questions aboth the Whizzbang Order, I do think you should start it. The main purpose could be what you suggested and just be a place where people can just be goof balls like Keito, Dave, and Zach. It could be placed on a web site that is accessable to everyone who is wanting to be part of this order. Heck yeah I would be willing to participate in this. I would think anyone nuts if they were odd balls and didn't want to join the Order of Whizzbang in honor of Keito. Well there you go hope that is helpful. I am trying to make up a web site to Inuyasha (if I can ever figure out how) if you would like to place it on there if you have no other options once I can figure out how to start it. If not cool too. Just let me know where you do put it. Ja ne for now, *~Star Fire Kagome~*
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Reviewed By: holyllama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 05:04 CDT
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This is such a great fic! The premise is really original, I love how you're trying to (and, I think, succeeding in) keeping the timeline realistic, the characters are extremely believable, and I'm sure you've heard it five dozen times but I absolutely LOVE the Stooges! The scene when they joined the rest of the group (sans Sherry and Inuyasha/Yue) for breakfast had me practically falling out of my chair because I was laughing so hard. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 20:36 CDT
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OMG!!! You have to update again soon!! I love this story!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Mist Goddess On: June 21, 2005 11:43 CDT
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Hey, it Call Me Kim. Can't seem to log in right now so I have to use this name..Can't remember if I answered your question or not...So I will answer it now. Yea, too many apples can cause colic. Any kind of over eating can cause it. Hope that was at least some help.
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Reviewed By: im not logged in On: June 08, 2005 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I can hardly wait for your next update, I'll be patient, promise(i hope you relize what a sacrifice that is) you have a life I will remain calm.....DON'T DROP THIS STORY I WILL KILL YOU AND MAKE IT LOOK LIKE THE CAT DID IT! okay i am calm now....sorry bout that i won't pressure you but I will check back every weekend! ciao! ~air
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Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: Diesel_Typhoon nsi On: June 02, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're storry is awesome, I totally love it, it seems totally original, and it's funny, I love Yue and his buddies, it's great, keep up the awesomeness!
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Title: *HUG*
Reviewed By: Lirrle Rin On: June 02, 2005 10:25 CDT
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Thank you so much for putting out another chapter to this story. I like it a lot. I hope you'll put out more soon, but as long as you are going to finish it I'm happy. I know you hate flames, so I'm going to put a little one here: MAKE SURE SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS TO THAT PURPLE HAIR OR.... OR.... Or I'll write another stupid post here. :Þ
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Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but I am dying to read more! AHHHH! *Hits herself over the head with a frying pan* *crunch crunch crunch*
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with StarFireKag :) But do know the movie Ghost (Swayze)(OObaby) when Kagome enters the room a sees Marg there kiss him . Have Inu spirit go into Kagome's body and tell Marg off and kick some a**. But I know Kagome can do it her self because she is bada** I'v seen the movies "Wow". I think you are doing a very good job and take your time. Don't ignor the others and don't make them get you to upset. Now for this story I'll give 5 double chocolate chip cookie because I love it!!! Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Love ya until next time
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Reviewed By: Kermit... On: May 07, 2005 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was long-awaited but excellent. Don't let the constant bullying get you down. I'm a fanfic writer, too, so I know about pestering and questions, even though my fanfic is not as popular as yours... sob... Keep up the good work! OF COURSE your life comes before this fic...if it didn't, that would be pretty sad... Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kag (not logged in) On: May 05, 2005 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! i can't wait until you update. yay yay yay yay!!! sorry like really super hyper here. I CAN'T BELIVE SHE KISSED HIM!!!!!! How about i kick her ass for him!!! I'll do it too!!! oh sorry rambling and hyper but yeah i love this and i can't wait for the update!!! By the way I know that MARG(lol) is Kikyo but who is Brit? well talk to ya later Star Fire Kagome
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Reviewed By: darkdynama On: April 24, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter^^ I'm sorry to hear ur having some problems with reviewers, i hope that despite how annoying it might get, you can continue this fic. i like alot and i'd luv to see how it progresses, stay calm and be kool and u'll b alright lol. i have one question though, is that Marg woman supposed to be like Kikyo? Just curious.
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