| "Wake Me Up Inside" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: crichtonsgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is truely amazing. I love all the emotion you've put in it. But I swear if you don't update soon, I may just have to hunt you down and make you update. *glares* UPDATE! please....
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Title: Waiting.....
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 11:46 CST
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You are evil, leaving us hanging so long. Come on, new chappie please??? Begging is not a good thing, it usually is a prelude to a death threat..... So that said, new chapter now, or I'll pull out the flame thrower!!!!
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Title: Wake Me Up Inside
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:58 CST
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*Swings giant sword* YOU WILL UPDATE SOON!!! I DEMAND IT!!!! come on, please? *whimpers* I'm begging here!! You don't want me to beg. I'll get Kagome to put a rosary on YOU!!! Then you'll have to write. I want more and very soon.
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Reviewed By: lesaleenotloggedin On: February 07, 2005 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you completely forgotten this fic, having writer's block, or just abbandoning it? This story is fantastic! I hope you will update soon.
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: NFNS On: January 17, 2005 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! This definetly takes it's place in my favorite fanfics category. This is such good story! But you haven't updated in a while. PLEEEAAASSEEE DO NOT give up on this fanfic, it's so good! Too many of my favorite fanfics are left at cliffhangers because the author stopped writing, and I hate that!
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Reviewed By: Call Me Kim [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No problem. I would love to help! :) One of the minor things that can happen to a horse is that thy can colic. It is basically a horse with a stomachache. All that Mark will have to do if give the horse some painkillers and keep it walking. It is an easily corrected condition that will pass quickly. By the way, I love how the story is going. It's great! Review soon!
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Reviewed By: Rakuen-o-Sagasu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 21:49 CST
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oh my goddd~~~~~ i love this fanfic... you are w/ no doubt the best!!!!!! i'm so sensitive w/ stories nd stuff i keep crying but still i love this fanfic!!!!! AAAHHH!!! i Can't wait till you update next!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 16:51 CST
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OH I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! WHEN WILL INUYASHA FINALLY WAKE UP?? ^_^
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 16:51 CST
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OH I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! WHEN WILL INUYASHA FINALLY WAKE UP?? ^_^
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Title: Wake Me Up Inside
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. Definitely worth putting on my author alert list!! I can't wait for another chapter!! Please hurry or I will send my evil army to harass you till you update!!!!!
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Title: You Are One Amazing Author!
Reviewed By: Blue Angel Nemisis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style is really cool, I like how you change the view point, not just have it coming from one charactor. I found that you have very few spelling/grammar mistakes which is really refreshing. I can't believe how many authors have such bad diction! This is the first Inu fic that I've read that actually deals with whats going on with the Inu Yasha from Kagome's time. I really liked how you had people who actually would be Inu's friends. This is a really cool fic and I hope that you have had fun writing it. Thats all for now and, yes, I will do the oh so overly used line, please, please, please, please update soon!! Oh, yeah! Your chapters are so not too long, besides it's better to be too long than to be too short!
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Title: CHOCOLATE!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!!I have been into the chocolate*Slaps hand* Bad HanyouBabe!!!Bad!!!I'm not supposed to eat lots of choclate cuz I get really hyper LOL....Anyway's I'm gonna smack the charries if they don't hurry up with the story so InuYasha can wake up!!!!Damn them!!!WAKEY WAKEY INU!!! IT'S TIME TO LIVE AGAIN!!!J/K Anywayz i'm dieing and absolutely positively NEED your story!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jem46 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think your chapters are getting too long at all really. Its better than them being really short like some authors like to do *death glares at them* I really do love this story though. Its so cute and I really love Zach, Dave and Keito. I'll have their babies ^_^;; Um... yeah >.> Keep writting...
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Reviewed By: BK On: December 12, 2004 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another great chapter. I just wanted to let you know I this is a great story and I think you have a lot of talent. I have to say this story is an original to me. I have read quite a few fanfics and this is the first one dealing with Inuyasha in such a state. Thanks for the reply to my review, I am glad to see you are dedicated to this fanfic. Keep up the good work. I will be watching for updates in the future. Hope you have a safe and happy holiday season.
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really liked this chapter, especially now that everyone is starting to figure out about Inuyasha and Kagome's past. And is it me or does Dave act sort of like Sesshoumaru? I know your character isn't based on his reincarnation because you said the three stooges aren't anyone from Inuyasha's past. but the two act alike in so many ways, it's weird. but yeah, can't wait for the next chapter it's getting soooo good! ^_~
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