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Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's awasome. I liked how Inuyasha saved her from Kouga and how Inuyasha and Kagome have a past together. They are just so kawaii. See Ya! ^_~ Mic Mic
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 10:07 EDT
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The first chapter was good. But then you just dumped all that information on us. Not only do I think you could do better presenting the information in the story, I think you should space it out a bit. Maybe you could save the flashback of their first meeting for a later chapter. /////////////// Also, Koga doesn't have claws. If you have to give him claws in this story, then that's fine. But in the Anime/Manga, Koga doesn't have claws. ////////////////// Anyway, I'd consider redoing it, but it was a good second chapter. Nice work!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 08:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwww poor kags and inu!!!! I hope they get a break for once and get perverted
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww poor kags and i really like how inu is protrayed in this
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 04:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited to see your work here! I have this same story on fanfiction on my favorites. I have heard about a lot of problems there from many others. Anyway, I am looking forward to reading this story here. Now you wont have any problems here though! Get ready everyone, this is a JUICEY story! So worth it to read!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start, keep going, this is very interesting...
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 01:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwwwww! How can you stop there! It was getting good too. I see that this is your first fic or am I mistaken because you sure don't write like it. Anyway I love you fic and really really hope and pray that you update SOON!!! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^_^ GREAT STORY SO FAR!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: magicuser On: August 01, 2004 20:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
omg!!! how can you stop here!! plzplzpzlpzlpzlplz continue asap!!! i love this !
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Reviewed By: gothgrl On: August 01, 2004 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is a very good story! no it is great!! i mean how can someone come up with something like this! i love the characters, you should get into kagome more, and koga is like he usually is, well.. moe aggressive.. heh, keep it up! cant wait!
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Reviewed By: sinead On: August 01, 2004 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!! i lvoe this!! dont stop!!!
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: August 01, 2004 17:28 EDT
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This sounds like it will be a great story. please add more chapters really really soon I can't wait to read some more.
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Reviewed By: ME On: August 01, 2004 16:09 EDT
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Okay--I remember starting to read this before--and I don't like FF.net either--so I'm glad you decided to post here--Kagome's fiesty!! can't wait to read some more--I like it!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! very catching story. When I read the description I was a little hesitant, but I'm glad I read it. I like the style of writing and where you started it. Keep up the great work, and PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ update soon. I'm hooked.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 11:44 EDT
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Hmm. Very interesting. You start off with a situation already underway, intorducing characters as if we were in the middle of a story. A style used by many. You'll have to be careful not to confuse other readers here, though. I can't speak for all, but I do know a few that would not appreciate not knowing what was happening. I assume everything will be explained eventually. I like stories that don't just dump information on the reader. It's good exercise for the mind to have to piece together information. //////////// Keep up the good work. However, I suggest that you abstain from using all capitals to spell out a word or sentence to signify shouting. Bolding it or italics work just fine. //////////////// This is going on my favorites list. I hope you update soon!! ^_^
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