| "Impossible Love" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: lettheinkbleed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2012 20:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!! |
Title: *FAN GIRL SCREAM*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AHHHHAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Oneshot_Yaoi_Shipper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2011 03:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Evil Laughter* I KNEW STALKING WOULD WORK!!!!!!!!!!! I tried other stuff like my shrink told me too but I had to go back to stalking because really it's the only real way to get anything done *nods head* but great chapter I can't wait to read more. There is only one problem I can see and that is a lack of lemons *sighs sadly* would it help if I cried? |
Reviewed By: inuydemon On: December 12, 2011 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG why did u end it there lol... i just found this story and im in love with.. please keep up the amazing work.. |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2011 14:11 EST
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Welcome back! It is so nice to see your voice again. I started reading this story when you posted the first chapter. I like it very much and have enjoyed the way your writing has matured. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: blackbutterfly15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2010 02:53 EDT
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What?? That chapter was so short!! I want to find out what happens next preatty please. It really is a good story.
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2010 23:03 EDT
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it was good- thanks
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Reviewed By: jenlyn On: April 27, 2010 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry to say, but in my opinion, it's pathetic how your begging for reviews. I don't mean to be offensive, but that's now it seems with your author's notes asking for reviews. If your story is good enough to receive reviews, then you would get them without having to ask. If you truly enjoyed writing and giving readers a chance to escape into a different reality of sorts, you wouldn't need reviews to validate your writing abilities. You should write because you want to, and because you want other people to enjoy it, not antagonize people into posting a review in order for you to generate another chapter. If your not getting reviews in an amount that satisfies you, that's a sign that you need to improve some, so with each chapter you should try to modify your style, and set goals for yourself in order to get the reviews you want. And also keep in mind that this is mediaminer..people don't review much unless you have like 50 chapters. In regards to your story, it's pretty good so far. It's an easy to follow, and the plot line is decent, but you really do need to work on your grammar and spelling. Nothing is worse than an author that can't spell or form a sentence that is grammatically correct. I hope this helps you in your writing..if not, then feel free to delete this. After all, this is just one person's opinion. Please do not be discouraged, or angered, as that was not my intent at all.
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Reviewed By: sm On: April 27, 2010 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading ur story n I liked it very much. I truly hope u finish it bcuz I think that it is coming out quite nicely. So don't worry if u don't get much reviews bcuz trust me, it is a great story thus far. :) I like it!
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Reviewed By: bk On: April 27, 2010 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
antastic story. I just found this story and have really enjoyed it so far. Please continue writing I will be watching for updates. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2010 15:11 EDT
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Wow two chapters in a row i'm reviewing. There were a couple of spelling errors i notice like the word 'not' instead of 'note'. Thanks for the shout out too. Umm the chapters run seamlessly I personally would a bit more length but as a fellow writer understand its not always possible. this battle with the all this build-up should be at least a chapter. anyway thanks for the update. Ja ne ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 12:20 EDT
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Great story so far please dont stop writing. I promise as long as you update i'll read i may not always review but i'll always read.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Oneshot_Yaoi_Shipper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 00:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
So sorry forgot to mention, I've changed names, I kinda got so caught up in stalking you (and a few other Authors I won't mention, *grumbles damn cops*) that I forgot mine so I got a whole new one, Hope you like it.
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Title: *FAN GIRL SCREAM*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AHHHHAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Oneshot_Yaoi_Shipper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm beside myself, I guess all that stalking of you finally paid off (And don't claim that I didn't stalk you cause you sicked your black hell cat of evil on me). So thanks so much for updating, I truely hope my lemon will be comming soon and if not, Oh well I can always continue stalking you until it does. :D
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 02:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey! I REALLY like ur fic! but.. you haven't updated in... over a year now *pouts* PLEASE add more chapters if you can *smiles* Thank you. Leanne
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Reviewed By: SUGI On: September 25, 2005 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOKIN REALLY GOOD UPDATE REALLY SOON
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