Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 11:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm. Very interesting. You start off with a situation already underway, intorducing characters as if we were in the middle of a story. A style used by many. You'll have to be careful not to confuse other readers here, though. I can't speak for all, but I do know a few that would not appreciate not knowing what was happening. I assume everything will be explained eventually. I like stories that don't just dump information on the reader. It's good exercise for the mind to have to piece together information. //////////// Keep up the good work. However, I suggest that you abstain from using all capitals to spell out a word or sentence to signify shouting. Bolding it or italics work just fine. //////////////// This is going on my favorites list. I hope you update soon!! ^_^
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