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Reviewed By: anubiset (to tired to sign in) On: October 06, 2004 21:28 CDT
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I love where you are heading with this. It is getting to be fun. Love it.
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Reviewed By: kuramafan58 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. It was really funny when it was like the blahing got louder and he looked up to see the teacher standing over his desk... I've been wondering... Why is it that so many of the Yu Gi Oh fanfics have everyone gay? There are more gay pairings here than Yu Yu Hakusho's Kurama and Hiei. Anyway, great story, I hope you finish!!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 19:39 CDT
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O.O Bad Kura-kun! Ryou is innocent!!!!!!!!!!! >< Oh well, I'm over that. I hope you can get to the idea soon! It's really funny! And I helped think of it! ^^;;; Ok, I'ma say please update soon.
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 17:04 CDT
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Hi hi. Mokuba stole my line! Well, that was interesting. o-o; There was a duel!...for a little bit...that was awesome, but you're right that the other stuff is more interesting to read about. Try focusing more on Jou in the next chapter since it seems like he's starting to remember things. Not much else to say...just waiting to see what happens. ^^ Good job! I hope Kaiba can save some of his normal silverware before it's too late...
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 21:04 CDT
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Yey! Another chappie! ^^ Next one's gonna have the idea, right???? It's gonna be so funny! Oh, I remember how you said right before you posted ch1 that you were going to make this an all angst fic. There's like no angst left! XD Oh well, you're so much better at writing comedy anyways. Update soon!
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Title: Black Memories
Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read ch. 5. Very good. I have read some books on magic and spells. If the girl went into a 15 year sleep and is still the same age then she would have had to have time suspeneded for her. Which means it would be powerful magic. Maybe she comes from another time or her family was powerful magicians in this time and they put her to sleep so that she could awaken with only her memories of her magic in order for some larger plan to begin. Maybe if it works Jou looks like or is her mom. And he raising her would decide on her being evil or good. But you would need those that wanted her for evil too. Just a suggestion.
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 19:13 CDT
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Dude! More cool silverware! This fic just keeps getting better. Try to have Aria do some more crazy stuff in the next chapter. You have a lot of options now, but I think you have a good idea of what's going to happen already. Keep it up! ^^
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 10:09 CDT
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Yey! New chappie! Awww, Ryo's so sensitive. ^ ~ Poor Mokie, he's taking it pretty hard. Oh! Remember the things we thought of in the museum for the next chappie! ^^ Can't wait until then!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 20:02 CDT
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This is very intrigueing. I love the plot so far. The little girl is deffinately something. It makes me wonder where she learned magic that powerful. It is not easy to cast any kind of spell unless you have a natural talent or blood lineage. I hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: divastarz63 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!! CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 18:46 CDT
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Hi again! This time I'll review right away! ^^' I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I liked the levitating. XD Could picture that really well. I hope his wound doesn't get infected. o-o; Why doesn't she heal him? That seems a little inconsiderate. I'm glad we got to see the return of the wildly popular blue silverware. I wonder what's in store for them in the future. >_> Good job!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 21:04 CDT
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O.O I can't believe I never read chapter two! I didn't get an email and I don't think you told me. Anyways, both chappies were really good! ^^ I can't wait for the next chappie! Yet again I know at least something that's going to happen. ^^;;;
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 09:42 CDT
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Hi! I couldn't submit before because I wasn't logged in. x-x; Plot twist!! I like blue silverware. Amnesia is a little iffy, but I think it can still turn out alright. You were so close to dueling this time! XD Good use of randomly placed complicated words. I really like that style. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 00:59 CDT
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Oh noooo. Yugi's loosing his memory and a weird girl is floating around town. Watch out Yami! Run Jou! Kaiba why is your silverware turning blue?! Flee! Hee.Hee. Great start! Can't wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 21:15 CDT
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Yey! First to review!!!!! ^^ Ok, nice story so far! You were right about it not turning out like dothack//Legend of the Twilight. ^^; SOrry for saying that. Ah well, please update as soon as possible. I'll work on that part in WTDC for you. ^ ~
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