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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Dibbs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a fantastic writer... even when I skip over the parts I don't like XD But it's still a great story, and it's written wonderfully! Love ya
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 18:35 CST
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Wow...I'm really impressed with how much you were able to develop in one chapter. The parts inside Ryou were especially well-written (yeah...math is pretty boring). So much stuff has happened since you first started writing this fanfic. You've grown a lot...there's a ton of passion built up inside of you, and it's good to see you be able to put it into writing. Good luck with the rest!
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Reviewed By: rikku_kiani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 19:54 CST
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grr, my other one got cut off...oh well here it is again!! lol i luv this fic!!!!! keep writing it, it's so good!!!! ^_^ (and thanks for the help w/ the characters x.x) we want more!!! :D
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Reviewed By: rikku_kiani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 19:51 CST
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i luv this fic!!!!! keep writing it, it's so good!!!! ^_^ (and thanks for the help w/ the characters >.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story, I like Kaiba's act toward Jou. I hope he gets his memory back soon. Aria is a big mystery.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOnderful story, I love it!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 02:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It is very different.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this one and I like the first chapter a lot. I will continue reading this because it's wonderful!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: June 18, 2005 21:53 CDT
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Sorry about being gone for so long. I have been busy. Beta reading can be hectic. I love how this story is going. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 19:29 CDT
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Wow...just wow... This was definitely your strongest writing. It's been such a long time since I read the previous chapter, but it was easy to get back into it and understand the feelings of the characters, atmosphere, etc. You really packed emotion into this one. I'm a little surprised about the violent parts, but I trust you know what you're doing. Thanks for using my rubber stamp for inspiration! *feels loved* Good luck on exams and your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jeremu On: June 14, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
From the little bit that I read, I liked it. It was well put and will probably turn out to be a great story. I'm kind of lost on the names, considering I don't know them in Japanese :-D. Ah Well, all in all it was good.
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 16:45 CST
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Hiii. You're finally back! ^__^ I missed reviewing. o.o Oh, and the italics worked! You did a really great job with this chapter. The characters' personalities seemed to stand out even more than usual. Aria was really cute and Hector was really scary. o-o; Poor Toby. xx; Please have Aria fling Hector in the air or something crazy. XD
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Reviewed By: anubiset (somputer problems) On: December 10, 2004 18:26 CST
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I loved this so much. Yeah, the Ishtars are here. I love those two. Great idea using the characters from Bakurasgirl`s stuff. I love her works. Read them all the time. She can`t get a new story out without me knowing about it. Any other characters of hers going to be used?
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:14 CST
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Whee. That was funny. Yep, I had no idea that that was how you were planning on using the math problem. Oh, and AP Calculus BC is the most fun math class ever...it in no way resembles a man in black threatening your life. XD I knew someone would get kidnapped! Looks like Kaiba doesn't have enough hidden people. I was a little confused at how Aria couldn't do anything to stop him. Maybe he can have some sort of pharaonic item that repels her...or maybe he knows magic and that's how he got in in the first place...just a thought. What's going to happen with Yugi's side of the story? Heh. I pictured Kaiba's PR people as the Turks. XD Woop! It's gonna go nuts! Great job again. ^_^ (and good luck with your project, if I haven't told you that enough already)
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