| "Black Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 10:09 CDT
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Yey! New chappie! Awww, Ryo's so sensitive. ^ ~ Poor Mokie, he's taking it pretty hard. Oh! Remember the things we thought of in the museum for the next chappie! ^^ Can't wait until then!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 20:02 CDT
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This is very intrigueing. I love the plot so far. The little girl is deffinately something. It makes me wonder where she learned magic that powerful. It is not easy to cast any kind of spell unless you have a natural talent or blood lineage. I hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: divastarz63 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!! CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 18:46 CDT
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Hi again! This time I'll review right away! ^^' I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I liked the levitating. XD Could picture that really well. I hope his wound doesn't get infected. o-o; Why doesn't she heal him? That seems a little inconsiderate. I'm glad we got to see the return of the wildly popular blue silverware. I wonder what's in store for them in the future. >_> Good job!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 21:04 CDT
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O.O I can't believe I never read chapter two! I didn't get an email and I don't think you told me. Anyways, both chappies were really good! ^^ I can't wait for the next chappie! Yet again I know at least something that's going to happen. ^^;;;
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 09:42 CDT
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Hi! I couldn't submit before because I wasn't logged in. x-x; Plot twist!! I like blue silverware. Amnesia is a little iffy, but I think it can still turn out alright. You were so close to dueling this time! XD Good use of randomly placed complicated words. I really like that style. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 00:59 CDT
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Oh noooo. Yugi's loosing his memory and a weird girl is floating around town. Watch out Yami! Run Jou! Kaiba why is your silverware turning blue?! Flee! Hee.Hee. Great start! Can't wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 21:15 CDT
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Yey! First to review!!!!! ^^ Ok, nice story so far! You were right about it not turning out like dothack//Legend of the Twilight. ^^; SOrry for saying that. Ah well, please update as soon as possible. I'll work on that part in WTDC for you. ^ ~
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