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Reviewed By: j On: May 26, 2005 08:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for writing this chapter my friend and I have been waiting forever for this. It was so awesome I can't wait to tell her you posted it. If paraphilia is half this good going to work tonight won't be so boring! Again thank you so much for posting this chapter it was great
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 02:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you finally updated! Don't worry I know how it is with school, I have been busy as hell too and may of my fics have been on hold, much to my readers dismay. To tell you the truth thogh, I was a little disappointed by this chapter... I mean don't get me wrong I love the fact that Raven(Karasu) and Kurama finally got it on, but your grammar was really lacking this time around... you may want to fix it up a bit, you know, editi it and then put it up again, cause unfortunatly, this is not one of your better chapters, despite its plot.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (not logged in) On: May 26, 2005 02:39 EDT
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nice chapter. it's about damn time they got together. i'm sorta surprised Kurama didn't know what was going on. i mean, i sorta expected him to have had sex with male demons as Youko. then again, he could have been doing that so Raven wouldn't suspect anything. though i doubt he was thinking clearly enough to do that. great chapter, though. i liked that first part about Raven's 'rebirth', not suicide. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: baka kitsune brat On: May 20, 2005 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, no! Karasu fired Kurama!!! Please take a memo from me and Roseblade and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: TankGurl On: April 27, 2005 19:27 EDT
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omg UPDATE!! pweez!! your story's the best! please update!!
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Reviewed By: roseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 21:24 EDT
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update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update now or i will kill you
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Reviewed By: Carinito [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooo your so evil. I love you! This is one of the best cliffys I've ever read. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Carinito [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 15:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm soooo glad you updated. I love this fic, like the rest IT ROCKS. K&K are just soo hot. Upate as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: April 08, 2005 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! This is such a cool fic! Please update soon, Eiko-San!! ^__^
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Title: Spiff As Usual!
Reviewed By: LadyAli-07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, I commend you on such a job well done! I so look forward to your updates, and don't worry about taking long, the updates are well worth the wait! I can't wait to see what happens and I hope that Kurama and Karasu end up doing the horizontal mambo...*laughs* Take care!
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Title: the burninator!
Reviewed By: Sakura Miko Lee Setsu On: March 16, 2005 21:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story!!! but please update!!!! must read the next chapter!!!! *twitch* tootles^_^
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Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 15:53 EST
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Please update your story soon? PLEASE I'll be waiting for you to update ya?
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Title: Your fanfic rox!!!!!
Reviewed By: jricespet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 12:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is totally awesome. I've read it twice just to retain the taste of it in my head. You write extremely well. Congrads. PLEASE hurry and come out with the next chapter. My friend and I eagerly await your next post. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 04:09 EST
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Great chapter! Keep em coming, I like how this is coming along... Oh and Demonic_Shade... Try to be a bit nicer here. Kine was just giving some construcive critisism, it was in now way a flame or meant to mean any harm... In fact Kine if you read this again e-mail me. Just click my name and it'll take you to the place where you can get in touch with me! Again keep up the good work oh authoress!
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Title: Dominic Shade
Reviewed By: Dominic Shade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 18:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...dude...I just read your reviews....that Kine bitch is MINE!!! Grrr...I'm from Texas and we don't take kindly to people talkin' like that to gals we like. Keep your head up and don't fret the dumbasses...if they weren't here...who would we laugh at?
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