| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Title: Miroku gets taught a very important lesson
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 00:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Chapters 27 & 28 - OH. My. GOD. Miroku's "...the evening kind of blurred after a few hours," and the silly grin on his face was priceless. InuYasha confirming his claims of two youkai women with a quick sniff and his stunned admiration for the 'pervy' Monk was hilarious. ---I had a "handsy" friend back in high school...and I was always smacking him, but he was a good friend; a good person. I never hated him for it, but he sure got the foul end of my ire each time he groped. LOL! What revenge for "wandering hands". I loved it! Talk about "asking for it"! ---and Makiko is getting subtle revenge on Jano's rejection...hoo boy! Things sure are heating up! -----Onward....
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: December 12, 2004 14:05 PST
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I found this story a few days ago...I normally prefer cannon pairings...but you have a gift for writing and I found myself captivated from the first chapter. I've made it to chapter 19 and am working my way through the rest. ---Great job. You really have a knack for diologue and I've quite enjoyed all of the character interactions (Inu & Kag are my fav pairings and the tension you have created between them is...delicious! Shame on you! LOL) I like how you have made Miroku kind and understanding (very in character for him) about Sango's relationship with Shesshoumaru. About the Sango/Sess pairing; I can see it happening the way you laid it out. You can't tell your heart who to love, nor can you ever know who you will be attracted to. I feel that Sess is only a little out of character, but then, who knows what goes on behind that impassive mask of his. I was just re-watching the episode where Rin was kidnapped and Sess damn near blew a gasket when Naraku was making his escape. He didn't even get that angry when InuYasha attained Tessaiga. My favorite quote to describe Sesshoumaru is, "Still Waters Run Deep" and that seems to be more true for this solitary TaiYoukai than for anyone else I've seen. Rin is doing a nice job of 'taming' him...LOL! ---Well, ONWARD!!
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 *not logged in* On: December 12, 2004 13:58 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Tear* I know your gonna put sesshy smelling her blood and then him saving her and her telling him *I hope* YOU CANT KILL SANGO!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 11, 2004 14:59 PST
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COOL!!!!!!!! i loved that chapter! and i loved how you put jaken in his place with rin! could you please hurry up with the next chapter? please???? *pupy eyes!*
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Title: what the hell?!
Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 08, 2004 04:42 PST
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this is a good story and i love the new twist! i'm in suspense, waiting for the next update! please do so soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: pazazz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 11:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was very dark and very good writing. I was so sorry I could not go on reading more. Please hurry and post another chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: December 06, 2004 16:55 PST
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Oh, sketi, I think I know who this is. It's either their father or worse thier Grandfather. That was a scary dude. He was downright evil. Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 02, 2004 17:22 PST
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how could sessy be so cruel! i mean, i know he's like like that, but to his mate? it made me want to cry. and i don't like to cry! are they going to get back together? please? oh, and by the way, i loved the fight sene between inu and koga! i can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: Got you! How could you was mine
Reviewed By: Kikilala On: December 02, 2004 16:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, if you read how could you?, it was mine. Lol. Just wanted to torture you a bit like you tortured me. He he, thanks for the biggest fricking bump in the road u could ever think up. Great job.
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Reviewed By: How could you... On: December 02, 2004 16:52 PST
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I checked back on this story everyday, I constantly await a new chapter it was like an addition. Now... I don't know if I even want to read the rest. My heart is shattered just like Sango's, how could you?
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Reviewed By: pazazz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 13:02 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is my favorite of yours so far. I say so far, because I have not read them all yet. Just when everything is moving along...POW you give us a left hook, story wise. I love this twist, after all, if everything went smoothly for all the characters, there would be no character development. You certainly do weave a powerful and rich tale and I look foward to the next installment.
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: November 27, 2004 02:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you! Why they hell did you write this! At first it was funny but not well your right I'm pissed! Can't Inuyasha smack some sense into that icy Son of a bitch!
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 *not logged in* On: November 26, 2004 17:54 PST
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:( i dont hate you just make sure you post another one soon *hides knife* oh that its for my lunch 'heehee'
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Title: Hanyo-sama
Reviewed By: BlackSeshStar On: November 23, 2004 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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PlEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEase update soon I think I even stoped breathin waiting for the updates so ppleeeeeeeeease update !_!
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Title: Hanyo-sama
Reviewed By: BlackSeshStar On: November 23, 2004 14:51 PST
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