"The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kikilala On: November 22, 2004 14:15 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I don't know if your going to ever get tired of hearing this but your work is amazing. You bring your stories to life through your characters emotions, feelings, and it's so vivid I can almost see it. I want to be transported into your story... well maybe not, with humans getting eatten and all. Lol, but your just that good. Writing on paper is just that writing on paper, but when you wield the power of words you bring your imagination to life. Kilala
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Reviewed By: Kikilala On: November 21, 2004 12:10 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Listen to me, I never just give writers a perfect ten for nothing. Girl your writing is off the ... shoot your just damn good. Your work is fabulous, whatever you type is gold. I am not just saying this, keep it up and write to your hearts content. I love your work. Kikilala
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Title: O-M-G! Reviewed By: caseclosed On: November 20, 2004 18:40 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Update soon!That story was KICKASS!!!!Just awsome...props.
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 14:07 PST Comment/Review: sry bout the ending of my last post...got a bit carried away...keehee...^_^
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 14:06 PST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: what can i say....WOW TOTALLY ROCKIN SHIZNITE COOLNESS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHH i cant waiiiit to read more so update soon!!!!! *BOWS* its reallylllllalsekjr;askjdf;ljas;dlkfj lkj
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 19, 2004 19:19 PST Comment/Review: cool. i like how you incorporated the the wolves into the story. now, i really, really want to see the next chapter soon, so could you please hurry it up? oh, and when does sango find out that she's pregenant?
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 20:01 PST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL this is one of the BEST fics i have EVER read! its funny, its romantic (its got awesome lemons) its original, it keeps pritty well to character, especialy with kagome and inuyasha, its got fights, you keep naraku in check (ie not never there (far to common an element in romaces) and not battleing them every two seconds)i love the way you put inu-yasha in the inu-yokai castle, he acts like i think he would, that jano and makiko bit is AWESOME (bring them together!!! T_T) and your original characters are awesome! you brought sess and sango together awesome and sess was the only character you really changed!!! i am in love with this fic. not boy-love, but lord of the rings-love. thats HUGE. this is one of the best fics i have ever read. its so funny with jano and makiko, and when kagome was pissed at inuyasha with the sango deal it was hilarious. the miroku-aiko-and the other girl bit had me laughing so hard. once agian i love this fic!!! okay, i will get off my soap-box now before i run out of characters... ^_^; *gets off soap box and genuflects at the almighty-fanfic-writer's feet* Kerina Silvil Jaganashi ps, did i tell you i love your fic? (ha 300 characters left! a new record)
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Title: What a NICE suprise Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 21:43 PST Comment/Review: I allowed my curiosity to open this fic this afternoon, and was I delightly suprised. This is a VERY good fic. Great plot twists, very well done humor, riviting angst, and smoothly flowing conversational reparte. I'm stuck at home with pneumonia, and when Kag started beating Inu Yasha up because she thought he was sleeping with Sango, I nearly coughed up a lung I laughed so hard. I have added this to my list of fav. fics, and an VERY much looking forward to your next update. You have kept all the charactors true to thier nature, and I can't wait to read what you come up with next. Well done. Don't stop writing.
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Title: Great Story so far Reviewed By: fire_star_mistress85(not logged in) On: November 17, 2004 18:52 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It took me three days to read it but I really loved this fic of yours. I don't normally agree with Sango/Sessh pairings but I have to say this is the best one I ever read. (well so far) I LMAO when Miroku got punishment by Makkio and Co. (lol) I only spotted a couple of grammars mistakes in the early but it doesn't really matter. Overrally this fic has everything that makes a fan fic great. You have the perfect lenght for each chapter and I love the plot twist, the unfinished "lemons" and angst. I really can't wait till you update. Oh and yes I have add you to my faves.
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Title: female Hanyo-sama Reviewed By: BlackSesshStar On: November 17, 2004 14:35 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Dear author of the Great Fanfic THE DEAMON AND THE EXTERMINATOR I want to tell you to please update sooooooooooooooon it will be an honor to keep being a reader of your wonderful story Thankyou oooooh wondeful writer of The fanfin THE DEAMON AND THE EXTERMINATOR PS.UPDATEEEEEEEEE SOOOOOOOOOOON PLEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEE >_~
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 17, 2004 14:13 PST Comment/Review: dude! don't do cliffys! they stink! i want to know what is up with koga being dead, then not dead! did naraku shuve a shard up him and make him evil, or did naraku just not kill him all the way? i've got to know!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet (can't log in at the moment) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 13:06 PST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey, I just caught up on your latest two chapters, and I wanted to let you know that I'm still finding this story tremendously entertaining. I love how Kagome is the one to feel the "morning-after weirdness," and the Kouga scenes are just a hoot. Loved the following line, in particular: If that's how dog demons love, I'm surprised any of them get born," Ginta said softly, turning to look at his friend. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: blacksesshstar On: November 16, 2004 11:15 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your story is great please update soon pretty pleeeeeeeeeeesase I'll be looking for the updates soon ThankYou for a story that feels my heath and sumerges my sences
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 11, 2004 14:31 PST Comment/Review: good. now please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: SESSHlovergirl On: November 08, 2004 15:13 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just love your fanfic is the best I read so far please update soon
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