| "The Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 21:10 EDT
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loving this fic, update soon by the way where do you get those food for thoughts?
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Reviewed By: stilettofairy On: September 02, 2004 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is sooooo cute and original. its one of the best i've read in a while. i can't wait until you update.
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Reviewed By: Gaudy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 12:52 EDT
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This fic is so cute. I want more. I love Shiro. :) Can't wait for the next update.
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Title: YAY you updated ^^
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Do I ever login?) On: September 01, 2004 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay so happy you updated. So col you gave Sesshy only one arm in this story ^^ just like it's suppose to be! most people give him both arms in a ficcie. And also cute you made Rin only speak to sesshy, also just like in the anime/manga ^^ cute cute! And I think kagome is getting an obsession with the kid van Inu yasha haha ^^ well hope you update soon again 'cause I love your story!!!! ja ne, K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: WS03 aka Wolfstar03 On: August 24, 2004 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the story, please update soon and could you please read my fic when you hvae the time. thanks
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (not logged in) On: August 23, 2004 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny! I love it! Pls update soon!
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Title: YOU UPDATED!!! (please do it again)
Reviewed By: BookNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 18:33 EDT
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Yeah I know I already reviewed, but I wanted you to know that I am a loyal reader. I like your new chapter, very cute. *sigh* I can already see Inu falling deebly in love with the babysitter, unfortunatly he is to dense to realise it. Oh well, that's what makes his character so fun to read about ^__^
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: August 23, 2004 03:21 EDT
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hey this was a really great chapter. man if a kid that i was babysitting said that to me i would be like man that was ebarrising. but cute at the same time
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: August 23, 2004 00:08 EDT
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Shiro is so cute. i wish i could babysit a kid like him just not with the messy house thing. but yeah this is a really great story and you should update soon.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 13:21 EDT
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Your "food for thought" is a nice little sig card. I've heard the first one before but not the other two. I'm wondering what other tidbits of knowledge you have to share with us. And I knew when I looked at your name I had to read this. I love Emerald's word and seeing as she took the time to beta yours (you know each other right?) then I was even more encouraged to read it. Shiro is so cute. I can see why you made him the way he is. Without him there is no story. I wonder if Sango will pick at Kagome for "stealing" her customers. I love your story so far. I'm glad I took the time to read it. And Sango is 20 and still in high school? I thought Kagome's 19 was bad…I guess you have your reasons for that. The age difference and all. Plus under age people don't have as many activities to engage in. And I see Miroku still has his roaming qualities. But I'm sure that will be commercial as well as leading to a bigger fight. But I can't wait to see what happens next. How is she going to explain working for a man she complained about all because of a little one's pleading violet eyes. (I'm trying my hardest to remembering to imagine him as a human). And Kikyo was just terrible. What kind of mother can she be? But I'm guessing since Kagome looks similar it helped Shiro warm up to her more and made InuYasha immediately dislike her. Can't wait for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: wind_moon On: August 22, 2004 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!! Please Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: shriylon On: August 21, 2004 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great start, I can't wait to read the rest! but this wierd thing happened at the end of chapter three...there weren't anymore chapters to read! go figure. You're gonna have to fix that. ^_^
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: BookNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 01:21 EDT
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Very good story. I love Shiro alreay, and you really captured the characters personalities well. Update soon. Your story is one of the ones that it seems like forever before you update even if it's just two days (in other words, your story is highly readable). I hope you make Kikyo seem like a bitch again(I hate her guts).
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Title: Please update soon!
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Do I EVER login?) On: August 20, 2004 10:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the start of this story! I wanna know what happens next ^^ I love stories where Inu Yasha and Kagome have a bad start, I hate it when it's love at first sight! I wanna know who the mother is of Inu's kid (I bed Kikyo :P) but I wanna know why they splitted up! Must know! And does Miroku and Sango get togheter in the fic? Or Rin and Sesshy? Must know, must know! So update soon, I'll put ya in my fav. list ^^ K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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