| "The Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Title: I love YOUR story!
Reviewed By: Youkai Danni On: October 11, 2004 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the attack of the great FanFictions by The Literary Dragon. Your so amazing in everything that you write..it's just breath taking i'm at the edge of my seat when reading these I love them so much...I swear when they where about to kiss I was holding my breath the whole time...I am so going to send you my story although I fear it is not as good as any of yours I just started and well it's not really even finished and doesn't probably make much sence but ah well I'm giving it a shot on how you will view it. Thank you again for another wonderfull chapater I cannot wait till the next!
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Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good chapter,keep up the awsome work. shane.
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome, great job,keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345(it's me...) On: October 01, 2004 19:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps*KAWAII!/Rin:Rin wants to be a princess!/Okay, I'll be a vampire!/Rin:*shivers*/Don't worry, I won't bite you! Nick maybe...I might give him rabies though...Cool!/Rin:*giggles*You''l match Kineko/Okami-san!/I know, her vampire thing last year was the coolest! The black lipstick...I hated mine.../Rin:Huh?/I was Cleopatra...looked very ugly...
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 04:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the great job!
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Title: Love it again
Reviewed By: Youkai Danni On: September 30, 2004 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again and again you cease to amaze me as your story seems to paint itself in my mind. Very well drawn out with Inuyasha's mood captured it exactly in my opinion. Now if you don't mind me putting this up but my E-mail address is Bad_Gurl21@mailcity.com and I would just love it if you would say give me a little hello once and awhile. You are very talented in writing I should know because I am also writing a story but it's not based on anything from Inuyasha. More like Angel and just alot of Energy stuff. Anyways please don't hesitate to give me a little message. My name is Danielle in case you didn't know. I would love to talk with you about your FanFictions there just so brilliant I can't stop reading them ever after I have read and reread the same story untill I practicly know it by heart. Keep up the good work! I'll be checking back everyday for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: September 29, 2004 02:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw that last chapter was cute but please keep up dating fast and i hope that you finish this soon thanks
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 18:08 EDT
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oh my god shiro is adorable! i love this story! you HAVE to update!
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Reviewed By: stilettofairy On: September 23, 2004 22:26 EDT
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very cute. i really liked this chapter but then again i like all of the chapters so...
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...KAWAII!/Rin:Hai, hai!/Shippou's so cute!/Rin:Hai, hai!/And Shiro...'The washing machine ate his sock', that's just plain hilarious!/Rin:Hai, hai! And Rin's in here too!
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Reviewed By: WS03 On: September 21, 2004 19:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Title: LOVE IT SOME MORE!
Reviewed By: Youkai Danni On: September 21, 2004 18:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my you've done it again with another well written Chapter. I love Halloween in fact this coming I'm planning on either buying Kikyo's costume or making it. WHATever it takes I swear I will be Kikyo for Halloween! *Ahem* Anyways heh loved the Halloween chapter great costumes for them. I only wish your Chapters where alittle longer...just alittle too short more my yearning to read YOUR story I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Again keep up with the good work *She bows to you to show respect then rereads all the chapters you have so far.*
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Reviewed By: kirby16 On: September 21, 2004 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story to be excellent! please update as soon as you are able i will be waiting for the next chapter. PERFECT 20 OUT OF 10!
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Reviewed By: Littleme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, update soon!
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Reviewed By: stilettofairy On: September 17, 2004 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a really good chapter; a lil short but i understand with school starting and everything its hard to punch out those long chapters. also with majorly impatient fans (such as myself) screaming (typing) update like all the time its got to be stressful. on that note i hope you update soon ;)
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