| "The Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Reviewed By: wind_moon On: August 22, 2004 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!! Please Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: shriylon On: August 21, 2004 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great start, I can't wait to read the rest! but this wierd thing happened at the end of chapter three...there weren't anymore chapters to read! go figure. You're gonna have to fix that. ^_^
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: BookNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 01:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story. I love Shiro alreay, and you really captured the characters personalities well. Update soon. Your story is one of the ones that it seems like forever before you update even if it's just two days (in other words, your story is highly readable). I hope you make Kikyo seem like a bitch again(I hate her guts).
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Title: Please update soon!
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Do I EVER login?) On: August 20, 2004 10:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the start of this story! I wanna know what happens next ^^ I love stories where Inu Yasha and Kagome have a bad start, I hate it when it's love at first sight! I wanna know who the mother is of Inu's kid (I bed Kikyo :P) but I wanna know why they splitted up! Must know! And does Miroku and Sango get togheter in the fic? Or Rin and Sesshy? Must know, must know! So update soon, I'll put ya in my fav. list ^^ K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Title: this is good
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 03:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story keep up the good work. diablodude
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