| "Concubine Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: HalcyonWolf On: May 24, 2005 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While the 'Tenchi gets all the girls' isn't a new idea, your story holds this reader's attention with an iron grip. Enjoying that everyone feels in character and am curious about what plot direction you're going to take your fanfiction now that the sex has started.
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Reviewed By: Nobody's Special On: May 23, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congradualtions, you have my admiration. While I realize quality takes time, I would like to ask that you step up the pace a bit. Originality appears to be the only weak point in this fic, but as is the idea is much better exicuted then ussual. The only major fualt in your work is your insistence that it sucks, stall putting that until a few reviews.
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: May 10, 2005 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you wrote this fic, and in my opinion its the only way to have a happy ending for everyone. Personally I agree, the only way to describe Mihoshi's skin is chocalate.
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Reviewed By: J.Crown On: May 01, 2005 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story, can't wait until you update, please, do soon.
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Reviewed By: Fallen Warrior [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing fan fiction. You should be very proud of it. The storyline is breathtaking. The first like three chapters were just... so good I can't find the words to describe them. Excellent, just purely excellent. Hope there's another chapter.
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Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite the fact that the 'Tenchi and company orgy' routine have been done before, you very skillfully execute it. Though the plot seemed just a bit rushed, this is a exellent story. Can't wait for an update! And no, you do not suck!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas Gurl (not logged in) On: March 01, 2005 21:40 CST
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why do great fic writers insist that their fics suck? You seriously don't suck at any of this stuffs, so quit kicking yourself! Update it agaian soon. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 21:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, so Ch. 6 was a really long time in coming, but it was still worth the wait. Refer back to my last review, I still love this fic. If you make us wait this long for the other two (Mmm, Washu), I think I'll lose it. Seriously, it could very well be your fault if a small animal gets tortured. Can you live with that?
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Reviewed By: j0 On: February 15, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
givvv.. mor!
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Reviewed By: wantsmore On: February 14, 2005 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you should go on this story until they actually get all married and that chapter will be really funny may be they can forget it and come in at the last second even though thats really old and alot of people use it.
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Reviewed By: Roger J. Phillips On: February 13, 2005 00:52 CST
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You do NOT suck! This is a very interesting story and I want you to write and post more. It would be interesting to see how the royals react when they find out that their eldest daughter has been with Tenchi. It should be fun to watch the wives hold down their husband as he tries to run Tenchi thur. Please keep up the good work!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: J.Crown On: February 01, 2005 16:02 CST
Comment/Review:
:J.Crown: NOOOOOOO! YOU MUST UPDATE I NEED LEMON NEEEEEEED IT I TELL YOU! PLEASE UPDATE OR I WILL BE FORCED TO RELEASE MY ARMY OF CHAOS UPON YOU!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it alot, keep updating pleeease!!! you've got something going very well. update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Jetflash6999 On: November 11, 2004 22:08 CST
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Oh please update soon. this is a truly wondeful (and sexy) way to work out all the tension in that house.
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Reviewed By: Roger J. Phillips On: November 10, 2004 02:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more as I am very curious as to how this will play out. I also want to see how Akea's father will react when he finds out that she has bonded with Tenchi. Please write and post more!
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