| "Concubine Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: Concubine Chronicles
Reviewed By: shadow samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a really good story i really think one of the best tenchi fanfic. the detailing is great. maybe you should put this on TMFFA people will love this so yea.so keep writing and i never really sy this to any one.
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Reviewed By: Chief316 On: September 25, 2004 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I've always felt kind of bad when Tenchi picked one girl, or two girls, or more, and then left one out. Of course not many authors could do 'all girls' well, save for a couple I've read. You've done a pretty good job so far. I just wanted to correct you on one thing. Mihoshi is from Seniwa (since she's the descendent of Washu's child and he was royalty from Seniwa). It was nice that you remembered the sheer amount of carrots Ryo-ohki can consume. Since she doesn't get full (her gem her power source) she could theoretically devour every single carrot on Earth. In any case keep up the good work.
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Title: Good Stuff
Reviewed By: Magin Man On: September 22, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the most tantalizing Tenchi fics I have read to date. After this third chapter, I found myself on the edge of my seat waiting for Tenchi to finally stop being a pussy. I don't want to wait another minute for this next chapter, but I don't want to rush your work either. I have very high hopes for the next installment; I am dying to know how Tenchi is going to work this out. Thanks for the memories!
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Title: DAMN YOU
Reviewed By: Zyu On: September 19, 2004 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you, Bsmart!Damn the cliffhanger that you brough a upon us.Damn, another long weeks before the next chapter, I don't think i can wait that long.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this idea. It will be interesting to see how Tenchi can convince the girls to share him. Of course convincing them that he loves them all equally will be difficult too. So far lots of interesting foreshadowing and I look forward to how things develop.
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Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
i realy enjoied this start of this story, i look forward to more in the future
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Reviewed By: NeoAzmodias [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YO, THis is a great fic and I also enjoyed your other fics On The RUn, Boot Camp Booty CAlls, 37 P.S. haven't read your hellsing ones as of yet but I am working on it keep up the great work NeoAzmodais
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Reviewed By: Chief316 On: August 20, 2004 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story. It sort of reminded me of 'Harem Saga' [if you haven't read it, I recommend going to the TMFFA site and checking it out]. I do look forward to the upcoming chapters. Keep writing.
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