| "Unseen Lover, Hearts Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 23:11 CDT
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you are no longer one of my favroit athors any more. its been 3 years and no update on this fic. yes i know its hard to keep gooing when you have not worked with it but still. you promised to finish all of them. no afense but that is a BAD thing to do.
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Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 22:03 CST
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will you PLEASE UP date this story
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Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 01:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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You are Musatchi's ancestor that is wrong it shude be desendent ancestor is before desendent is after. your saing miroku is his grandpas dad or grandpa not grandson. just a littel tidpit
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Title: T_T
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 03:11 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON!!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 10:49 CDT
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awwwwwwwwww....that sucks it really does i no...but i love the story so update whenever u can kk???...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 21:05 CDT
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its okay that you havn't updated in a while. just please continue this story, its really good.
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Title: update please
Reviewed By: Diren [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are great wirter. I love the story. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: April 18, 2005 09:57 CDT
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Hey Mija, I am sorry sorry and I hope and wish you that you will get better soon. Even though you have no Internet access, please do not give up writing your stories. You still have paper and pencil, ne?! ;-) I will be waiting for you, bbbeleana
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Title: Fare Thee Well
Reviewed By: FyrlocheNSI On: April 18, 2005 06:18 CDT
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Dearest Mija, I will miss you. I will keep you in my thoughts and prayers. And as for your stories, just keep writing them and when you get access back update all your stories at once. Hopefully, this won't be a long absence. Take care of yourself. Until we meet again, your friend Larry, aka Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry for your lost i lost someone vary close to me when i was littel so i know some what what it fells like. i'm sorry i whould not even wish that on an enemy. update as soon as you can. and therew is a saing. "its allways darker befor sun rise"
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Title: prayers
Reviewed By: short stuff On: March 21, 2005 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has really nothing to do with the fic. though i am enjoying it a lot! but i just wanted to let you know that my prayers are with you and your family. it will get easier in time. i hope this helps maybe just a little bit. thank you for the wonderful fic. keep up the great work, and take as long as you need to update. thank you. ja ne
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Title: hiya!
Reviewed By: InuYashsaLoveLorn (WTF i am signed in!!!) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow so far the fic's i've read from you rock! once again the same thing from the oterh review for you oterh fic aplies to this one as too! ^_^
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Title: Authors note
Reviewed By: Son Lila On: March 20, 2005 14:02 CST
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Thank you for letting everyone know why there have been no updates. I'm very sorry for you and your mother and the rest of your family. I know it's hard, I've lost all blood related Grand-parents and three step-grand-parents. My Grammie died only a few days away from my birthday so that kinda killed my celebration. I hope you get through it ok and I hope your mother feels better soon. I look forward to your future updates and wish you the best of luck. Ja Ne! ^_~
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Inu_terra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 13:12 CST
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I am truly sorry for your lose. i would like to offer you my support. Take as much time as you need I'm sure your muse will come back and i actively await the day! I really love your fic it reminds me of a movie i say as a child -The Polar Bear King.. but with an intresting twist! Can't wait to see what you have in store!!! Heart Tara(huggles)
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 18:02 CST
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*clears throat* I would like to say... *gets down on knees* PLEASE UPDATE!!!! FOR EVERYTHING GOOD AND HOLY IN THIS WORLD PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! This has been a begging by inu fan.
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 17:08 CST
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Wow great chapter I also know how it feels to have your muse run away Kari has gone and had not returned keep it up your story is great dont let any one tell you other wise luv ya Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup, that certainly was a lot quicker than before, thanks for the update and know this: No matter how long the breaks between updates are, i will always be here to read your stories, they simply rock!
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: January 24, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really getting into this story! Please update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: anon... On: January 24, 2005 00:43 CST
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i really love this fic, and yeah, the last chappy was a lil short, but it's ok! i'm excited about the next ones! and when inu and kag start hanging out! ahh.. love.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 23, 2005 19:44 CST
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Thank you, I am only glad to be allowed the opportunity to read them. I am sorry I can offer nothing but a review in return. I think I understand what you mean, it gives us an insight into not only Miroku's thoughts but the events happening in the background and the fact that there are um...traditions or customs that Kagome will have to adhere to (Kind of like when I went to Japan, had to get a book on the local customs beforehand ^_^;) I look forwards to the next chapter but please, don't hurry on my account. I will be here whenever. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: seashell On: January 20, 2005 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your story, its quite humerous.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 20, 2005 18:57 CST
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Excellent chapter. I really like how you are playing this out, flicking between the POVs of the two of them. Slowly we are learning more about them both and their personal attitudes to the world although I think in time they both may change somewhat, hopefully learning to accomodate one another. I look forwards to seeing what you have in store, I hope your muse finally recovered from last time. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: January 19, 2005 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An update! I luv this story! Please update ASAP! ^-^
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Fyrloche-not signed in On: January 19, 2005 06:55 CST
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Hello, luv. Good to see you writing again. And even though it is short, it is a good chapter. Look forward to reading more. Take care, Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you planning to continue this soon? This is really good!
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Reviewed By: skaterpg guy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 03:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update! This is really really good. I want to read more!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 03:51 CST
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I've had my muse escape before, don't worry about it. See, she ran off with my mailman, married him, had the marriage annulled Britney Spears style, took a month off in the Himalayas to 'find herself' and then came back. I keep her chained in my closet now. :) But I like the premise of your story, and I like how Kagome can see their auras! "You're beautiful." *Looks star-struck at the glowing light that is Inu* I sense some danger coming from the Kikyo sector as well, that bitch should die. *Puts on the Kikyo-hater sticker* Anyways, I hope you update soon, and oh! Before I forget, I could beta your story if you want. I'm good with grammar/spelling/characterization. :) Email me on that. Anywho, happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: Rawben On: November 29, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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aww! ch 6 is so short! you have to update soon! i love the plot, but i need more! :(
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Reviewed By: queen mira On: November 28, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update plz
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: November 27, 2004 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooo! I like this story a lot! Please update ASAP! I want to smell some love in the air! ^-^
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