| "Unseen Lover, Hearts Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 27, 2004 13:06 CST
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Don't worry about it, I though it was an excellent chapter. Well, at least this way she can see something of him, even if it is only his aura. Perhaps that is enough for her to fall in love? I look forwards to seeing more when your muse returns, unfortunately I have to admit I haven't met anyone who had lost thier muse, nor have I received one so I'm not really sure where to start... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Im not logged in* Prinsess_serenity59 On: November 27, 2004 10:43 CST
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wow great chapter mabye if you leave some crakers or dog biskits out he'll (she'll) come back *evil grin at Kari*
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 07:01 CST
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I love the idea of Kagome falling for IY's inner beauty because that's all she can see but to be fair, shouldn't he have to take inverse potion, as well?
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Reviewed By: marta178-not logged in On: November 27, 2004 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did have a biiiiggggg writers block...2 months....I hope you update sooner next time :P This chapter was great!! Update SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 03:09 CST
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I'm glad to see this updated again! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: robinmng On: November 05, 2004 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! great plot! everythings great, i hope you post again soon!
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Reviewed By: llxsunsetxll [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really cool story. i cant wait for the new chapter. i hope u are feeling much better.
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Reviewed By: KOOL! On: September 25, 2004 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story it is kool but plz updtae faster i cant wait until the next chapters so plz plz plz update faster Font Color
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 24, 2004 16:27 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Sorry to hear your still unwell, hope it passes soon. Oh and please accept major apologies for the delay in reviewing, went to Japan and have been a bit out of synch ever since I got back. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *n.s.i.* On: September 11, 2004 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! i just want them to meet dam*** and ya, good job! i ohpe you get better...well i hope you are better since its been a while! And ya,,,,ahhh! Update!!!! PLEASE?! Wnhy are your stories sooooo ogood? "wistful loook" it makes waiting SOOOO much harder! lol-so upate and..."hug" and ya soooo.....yeah! love ya girl! all my support! -Sly ~^-^~
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Reviewed By: Leia3000 On: September 10, 2004 15:32 CDT
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really great story. I like the spin that you gave to eros/ psyche myth. It fits nicly
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka(too lazy to sign in) On: September 09, 2004 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter! This story is so intriguing. I hope you feel better soon. Keep up the great work. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. I can't wait to read more. Hopefully, in the next chapter Inu and Kagome will finally meet. Your story is very intriguing. keep up the great work. You are talented.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 09:07 CDT
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I can't wait to hear the explanation of how Naraku came to be working for the Rekai. Also, Rin may be intrigued by Naraku but her outfit sounded very similar to Sess'; do they wear father daughter outfits?
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEy. Yay, ya got a beta..i think. good for you! Haha,well i enjoyed this chappie! And ya-i cant wait for more. and of course i will always read your stories, though i dont know what they will be, cause whatever comes from you has GOTTA be goooood!!! Hahaha! Well, good job! Luvin it! Take care and "gives you cookies" for you! Ja ne!-Sly ~^-^~ BTW-WAs just wondering when your gonna upadte "Forever Pain" I LOOOOVE that story and i want moooooooore! Okay, ja ne!
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